A day in our office is fun
by Willtorecord

Comment:
I feel like this may be a stretch, thematically. That said, compositionally, I like the balance of the frame, the sense of movement. It's an interesting capture, it just doesn't line up thematically, for me personally.

DPC inc.: We Cut Through The Competition!
by leugim_seven

Comment:
Nice concept. Good lighting. Excellent use of a concrete saw. Something I notice in your model that has been missing in some other entrants' models is that his expression matches the title. He looks like a guy that wants my business and wants to take it to the next level. Great effort.

Visa and Mastercard; cross culture
by rajron

Comment:
I understand the selective desat. In fact, I wouldn't have noticed the Visa/MC sign without it. But the comp itself is rather unbalanced. It seems slightly out of focus, and even though the eye is drawn to the Visa/MC sign, I am still not sure where the focal point of the image lies. This is all convention, and I'm sure many people will adore this image more than I do as a matter of taste. I hope this helps.

Soon to be sealed
by BJokerud

Comment:
I like the idea. It IS stock, IMO. The thing I'm not keen on is the upward lighting. It creates some blown out highlights and some distracting shadows.

Dear Emily
by oldgrouse

Comment:
There are several distracting elements at work here. Firstly, that plant, the paperwork, and the printer in the background. Changing the POV may have helped this. Secondly, the frontal lighting is harsh, and creates some nasty highlights. I also feel that the model isn't helping the composition any.

Getting Ready For Work
by angkokweng

Comment:
The highlights are a little harsh in this capture, and it could be a touch sharper. Other than that, I could see this as a business stock photo. Those are some wicked shorts!

Thank you... (Roadside Insurance Brochure)
by Carlo21

Comment:
This could work in a brochure. It seems a little hazy. Could be my laptop, though.

Charting the progress
by Tygerr

Comment:
This is a wonderful image. First impressions, the DOF is perfect. It's effective, the model is effective, and the bar chart is perfect. It screams stock photo.
Technically, all the elements are there. The lighting is well placed and not harsh. I wish I could go 8.5. Will you settle for a n 8?

There for you
by aKiwi

Comment:
That is one UGLY briefcase. That said, it's a sound image. tell me you used a coat hanger for that tie. I don't really like the white background, necessarily. If I could change one thing, that would be it. Or crop tighter to the body, the run looks a little bit contrived.

What? No jobs?
by bjh0705

Comment:
I'm a dog owner, so I have to try to be unbiased, but I know what this look means ;) This is both clever and sound, technically and thematically. 8