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01/20/2009 04:48:38 PM |
Good concept and a bit of contrast would help the impact. Good luck! |
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01/19/2009 01:03:38 PM |
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01/18/2009 03:43:19 PM |
well taken. Could use a slight curves adjustment but focus, colors, and comp great. |
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01/18/2009 08:51:17 AM |
Wow, your edit really says 'Brochure': all the way! 8 |
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01/18/2009 04:58:02 AM |
It appears the if you would have played with your levels and curves, your tones would have been better...a little flat...good idea |
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01/17/2009 10:51:06 AM |
I think your explanation in the title was needed. Without it, I may not have realized where it could be used. Composition seems a little centered and the photo overall is a bit flat, but with a lot of potential. Out of curiosity, I popped this into my image editor and some basic adjustments (levels, curves, saturation & contrast) really gave this a lot of the visual pop that I would expect this to have if it were printed in an advertisement of magazine. |
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01/16/2009 11:34:45 AM |
Nice image - good composition. Conveys a message that could be used as stock. Could have tweaked it a bit more for contrast/sharpness. |
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01/16/2009 03:07:34 AM |
great shot, looks candid rather than posed
A bit more pp and you would score much higher. |
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01/15/2009 05:43:10 PM |
Way to go with capturing a moment. Not the event, but the thank you. Sad the color is so washed. |
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01/15/2009 03:53:24 PM |
Great photo heck of a flat takes two jacks |
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01/15/2009 03:45:09 PM |
Great idea! But it looks like you took the pic through a car window... |
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01/15/2009 02:54:43 AM |
For this a smiling face from the helper would probably have been a good idea. |
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01/14/2009 06:25:11 PM |
might be good to check your "levels" (black's don't quite seem black)
nice expression though. |
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01/14/2009 04:47:07 PM |
This could work in a brochure. It seems a little hazy. Could be my laptop, though. |
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01/14/2009 11:35:31 AM |
Needs to be brighter, or more contrast... perhaps even up the saturation.
Good idea and well shot... just needs a bit of PP. |
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01/14/2009 04:01:01 AM |
What? I thought it was in every guy's DNA to know how to change a flat tire. |
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01/13/2009 10:50:08 PM |
Only one suggested improvement: Business guy should be on the cell phone. NIce job otherwise. I will put a link to it in my "If I ever need to create a Roadside Insurance Brochure" file. ;-) |
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