Clayton 1
by breadfan35

Comment:
This one is a little washed out with brightness. ISO 3.5 or Shutter 1/1000 could change one of those numbers to compensate. Green and Blue colors are great but his skin is washed out.

Jessica Look 1
by breadfan35

Comment:
A Beautiful model. These two pictures of Jessica are really great. Nice work.

Look 3
by breadfan35

Comment:
Beautiful model. Great focus and clarity in the face. Excellent angle where the shoulders pass through the frame. The skin is a bit dark on her right arm, or left from the viewers perspective relative position. Maybe just a tan line or lighting.

Windchimes Day 8
by riversong

Comment:
Nice Nice Nice, try it with a smaller DOF. That would look cool with a blurred green background focusing right on the colorful chimes. Well I just read that it was not set up. But set your lens to 300 and back up to fit it in the frame, you probably need a tripod for this. It should blur the background and focus right on the chimes.

Day 9 - Abstract.jpg
by Monicagd

Comment:
Very good composition of a natural abstraction. I wonder what it would look like if you tuned out or shifted the hue of the lime green color. I never liked that color, except if it is a lime or a un-ripened banana, or a saturated logo of something called the x-box or software program. Okay, I guess I like lime green with some kind of a bias according to its location relative to the content of physical form being represented. (Wow-did you read what I just wrote? - That's weird right there. lol.)

Day 8 - Things are Lookin' Up
by runeric

Comment:
I can definitely tell you used a flash here. It is washed out with white. Try a flash box made out of ordinary printer paper. I made one and it works pretty good. More Ambient light would be a great addition here. Also the eyes appear to be dodged, washing away the color and the black through the pupil.

Squirrel
by Elaine

Comment:
An ordinary squirrel eh? Is its name John Smith? lol. Great lighting, great placement, But the image is blurred a bit and fuzzing out the depth of detail. Brilliant from 1 meter viewing distance from the screen, but the closer my eyes get, the detail starts to degrade.

Day 9 - Wick
by kteach

Comment:
Great detail right on the tip. Placement is superb. I like the arch of faded color over the top, and the wick seems to disappear down into the blur with just the right amount of it. Lighting is also great.

Hair Brush
by trevytrev

Comment:
Awesome picture. The border is great. Not just one solid color too big.

I wish the info and comments were farther apart from these short photos. Nothing to do with your picture but it is distracting trying to look at the screen and forget about the stuff around it when it is shortened in height.

Message edited by author 2007-06-10 03:03:01.

Day 9
by breadfan35

Comment:
That is cool. Great focus and light. I like the small reflections around the outside of whatever container they are in.