Let's go!
by dimitrii

Comment:
"Critique Club Comment"

COMPOSITION- The way you have placed everything is good. I like that you've filled the frame and don't have a whole lot of extra space in the shot. You could have cropped just a little less to get the whole bag in.

BACKGROUND- it is white

CAMERA WORK- Your exposure is great.

DIGITAL PROCESSING- you've compressed this good and your levels seem fine.

MY OPINION- I thought this photo was just average during the voting. I think it would have a little more impact if you would have the hand holding the passport and more in focus. Or what I think would be neat if you could have slowed down the shot and had the hand taking the passport out of the bag.

Ice
by lumbus

Comment:
This is great. Perfect shutter speed. I love waterfall photos.

Smoke on the Water
by inspzil

Comment:
Great night shot and colors. This is pretty. It looks like it needs rotated about 1 or 2 degrees clockwise.

Who let the dogs out? Who?
by justine

Comment:
this is hilarious. I wish you would have done some fill flash or used a separate light so there wouldn't be any harsh shadows. This is great though. I love it.

The Rose
by autool

Comment:
great detail in this shot. It seems a little overexposed or too contrasty, I don't know it just feels misty.

Wild Mustangs
by goodtempo

Comment:
from the thumb I thought these were real. I love the shot, just wish that they were real. 9

Maybe I Can Sneak Into DPC2
by GeneralE

Comment:
~Critique Club Comment~

COMPOSITION- This one made me laugh. It is a great shot going for a humorous look. You've cropped it nicely and the lighting is great. This makes a good portrait shot. Also I like that you've gotten down to his level.

BACKGROUND- It's a little messy with the houses in the back and the wire.

TECHNICAL- The lighting is great on his face. Very natural. The shutter and F-stop are great. I saw a show on TV tonight and you might try using the flash in daylight and see how it looks. It said it brings out color and a little gleam to the eye.

MY OPINION- Cute shot. I thought this was funny. Good job.

Timing Motion
by gerard

Comment:
~Critique Club Comment~

COMPOSITION- Great idea for the motion challenge. This is cropped great and I like how the Metronome is angled a little and not looking straight on. It gives it a 3 dimensional feel instead of being flat.

BACKGROUND- Background is a little cluttered. It would have had more of an effect with a solid background.

TECHNICAL- You did great in choosing the Aperature and Shutter speed. You aren't overexposed and the blur is great.

MY OPINION- This was a good shot for the theme of the challenge. The flower on the wall is a little distracting to the rest of the shot. I like it.

Light Speed
by jenarom

Comment:
"Critique Club Comment"

COMPOSITION- Very great idea for the motion challenge. You cropped the shot very well for the theme of you picture. Creative idea with the light. Maybe you could have added just a little more lights to fill the rest of the space. Other than that I think it's perfect.

BACKGROUND- The lights are perfect for the background. Just a little more to fill the rest of the space.

CAMERA WORK- DOF and shutter speed are great. You hit it great.

DIGITAL PROCESSING- I don't know if it's just a light reflection or little "jaggies" just make sure you save it as close to 150K to keep it as clean as possible. Your levels and colors are great.

MY OPINION- I was lucky to get assigned this shot. I think this should have won. I love it. I'm a big Star Wars fan too. Very great job.

Login
by stephan

Comment:
~~Critique Club Comment~~

COMPOSITION(Content)-
This is a unique idea. Only one of them this week. It is very simple. It just seems a plain. You've got good detail on it being that close. Having it in the Rule of Thirds would have been nice.

BACKGROUND- All those little green dots are kind of distracting. It just gives a wierd texture feeling to the picture.

CAMERA WORK- you did good with this. Shot is in focus. and clear. Good choice on the aperature and shutter speed.

DIGITAL PROCESSING- You did good in not having any noise from the camera. I might suggest if you have photoshop or another photo editing program and go into the selective color option and if you turn the black channel up to about 80 to 100% and the use the brightness and contrast you can totally get rid of all those bumps and keep the "login" about the same color.

MY OPINION- unique idea for the challenge. It didn't impact me personally that much. I went in and played with the color channels and "legally" edited for this site. If you'd like to see what it looks like just drop me a line. Hope I helped any.