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12/20/2002 10:30:39 PM |
~Critique Club Comment~
COMPOSITION- Great idea for the motion challenge. This is cropped great and I like how the Metronome is angled a little and not looking straight on. It gives it a 3 dimensional feel instead of being flat.
BACKGROUND- Background is a little cluttered. It would have had more of an effect with a solid background.
TECHNICAL- You did great in choosing the Aperature and Shutter speed. You aren't overexposed and the blur is great.
MY OPINION- This was a good shot for the theme of the challenge. The flower on the wall is a little distracting to the rest of the shot. I like it. |
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12/15/2002 05:54:51 AM |
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12/12/2002 09:19:30 PM |
Sweeet! Much better then the other similar picture. |
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12/12/2002 03:58:33 AM |
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12/10/2002 01:51:27 PM |
Nice composition, like the monotone-look of the image. Something's casting a shadow on the right that doesn't need to be there, but a very minor gripe. |
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12/10/2002 03:37:24 AM |
Neet idea... the background distracts the eye from the motion though. A dark solid backgroud might have helped keep the attention on the needle. 6 |
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12/08/2002 08:59:50 PM |
The motion of the metronome is interesting. Like the overall brown color scheme in this image. The painting/reproduction in the background, although interesting by itself, clutters the image. Likewise, somewhat, on the rounded edge of the table or desk. This would have been so much more interesting in a spartan setup. Metronome: cool (damn, i like the texture of the wood! and the clarity of the logo); motion: cool; background clutter: uncool. Journey |
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