Morning Primroses
by pinback

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

FIRST IMPRESSION:
Beautiful flowers

COMPOSITION:
Nice simple shot of the flowers. My only suggestion here would be to try cropping a smidge off the bottom, top and a bit off the left side.

TECHINICAL:
Very nice dof. I like how the eye is led from the bottom right up and out to the top left. Dof is underestimated on this site, and you used it very nicely. I like how the focus is on the flowers on the right, and great focus too. Nice use of natural sunlight, I think it worked quite well for you. I would however, try boosting the hue on green, it makes the flowers stand out more, and the background nicer.

OVERALL IMPRESSOIN:
A nice picture but lacking that wow factor that makes for winning photographs. I do however think that this has a lot of potential with just a few minor adjustments.

(btw, my first critique club critique, hope your not too disappointed.)
Good luck in future challenges!
Gekker

Message edited by author 2003-04-30 17:04:15.

Candy is Dandy, but Liquor is Quicker
by Artifacts

Comment:
this is great! Only real beef is the line on the backdrop, a bit distracting.

Classic Candy
by Anachronite

Comment:
I like how the perspective on this makes me feel like a little kid looking up at a huge door.

Little Brother
by karmat

Comment:
I really like this. great color, focus etc... I know it's candy but the way you composed this I actually thougt "awww how sweet".

Northumberland
by howza

Comment:
I really like this, I think I would have adjusted this a bit to make it level though.

π rSour
by justine

Comment:
I'm not sure that the background choice was the best here. Also, I think this could use some sharpening. I like the framing of this.

Pie Are Squared (πr²)
by ClubJuggle

Comment:
ok, cute idea. I'm not sure the square pie on the round plate works though, nor the blue of the plate.

A Mathematician's Yahtzee Roll - 31415
by StevePax

Comment:
good take on the challenge. good pic, not sure if I would change the focus to the dice in the front rather to the back or not. Just not a real interesting shot I guess.

Circles and Circles
by nathaliedoo

Comment:
I like the idea of this but am not sure about the colors or the texture. Definitly meets challenge.

PI Worshippers Memorial Hall Dome
by jjbeguin

Comment:
This is a good example of pi, but just needs something, or actually needs less of something. The light on the left is distracting, and this just seems very unbalanced. I really like the subject matter but I really can't seem to find a real focal point.