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10/12/2002 09:22:00 PM |
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10/12/2002 01:03:00 AM |
| interesting but I think a sharper focus would have helped. 5 |
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10/11/2002 05:13:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3,
Total Averaged Rating5. Autool
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10/09/2002 01:41:00 PM |
meets the challenge - yes
technical - shallow DOF, focus seems to be behind the cigarette butt
composition / appeal / would i hang it on the wall - wouldn't hang it on the wall. cigarette butt is too centered, overall subject not appealing (i know, it's garbage, but anyway ....).
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10/09/2002 01:13:00 PM |
| I would have prefered this with a bit more focus. The butt stands out well on the background, and your framing/cropping are great. Lighting cinditions are favorable for the shot. Definately garbage, but creativity is a little low. Overall an average shot. Good luck in the challenge. ~hbunch7187~ |
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10/09/2002 04:24:00 AM |
| Looks a bit fuzzy methinks |
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10/08/2002 12:23:00 PM |
| Out of focus, distracting foreground, poor composition. Sorry, but I can't score this very highly. |
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10/07/2002 08:46:00 PM |
| It might have been more effective if something had been in focus, everything appears fuzzy. Composition is pretty good. The triangular shape at the front seems distracting, however. |
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10/07/2002 05:18:00 PM |
| It's a bit out of focus...your subject is too centered...and the object on the bottom is distracting...sorry :( 3 |
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10/07/2002 09:51:00 AM |
| The focus is a little off |
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10/07/2002 09:29:00 AM |
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10/07/2002 08:39:00 AM |
| Seems to be focused behind the subject? A bit plain for my tastes. |
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10/07/2002 08:11:00 AM |
| nice macro, thingie in the foregrounds a little distracting. hard to shoot a subject in the middle of a field, leaves a lot of dead space around the edges of the rectangle. find a cigarette butt in a corner, or near a curb, so there are more lines involved in the background. |
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10/07/2002 07:29:00 AM |
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10/07/2002 06:35:00 AM |
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10/07/2002 04:09:00 AM |
| Good idea. I think if the cigarette was a bit sharper and less centered, it would have more impact. |
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10/07/2002 03:34:00 AM |
| main subject is not quite in focus.. remember the rule of thirs when taking shots, it can help you composition 100%.. 4 |
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10/07/2002 02:22:00 AM |
| Too centered and too soft on focus. DPz |
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