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01/13/2007 07:50:43 PM |
| Would be nice to see a bit more of the model. |
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01/12/2007 09:02:45 PM |
| Just eyes without a context do not make a good portrait. And they are nog sharp either (2) |
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01/12/2007 10:07:29 AM |
| Eyes, they are beautiful but not doing much for me becouse; of the crop, more face would had been much better. It's also a bit grainy, too hig ISO maby ? |
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01/11/2007 11:52:45 AM |
| the cropping is very unfortunate. I see two very pretty eyes, but the processing is not very well done |
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01/11/2007 11:14:07 AM |
| i think this is more a close up than a protrait.. or not? |
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01/11/2007 07:51:57 AM |
| Two eyes is not a portrait in my book. You have to be able to recognize the person - either by face, posture or surroundings. |
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01/11/2007 07:44:25 AM |
| When presenting only eyes, you better do a good job. These are a bit dull. |
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01/11/2007 07:27:44 AM |
| not enough focus on the eyes. lacks sharpness. |
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01/10/2007 10:51:31 PM |
| where is the rest of her face? |
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01/10/2007 09:10:23 PM |
| I understand that many like the extreme close up composition, so this is entirely subjective. But I can see nothing of the character of the person you've tried to capture. |
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01/10/2007 08:13:55 PM |
| Sharper focus would help. |
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01/10/2007 05:27:35 PM |
| I think this lacks detail - perhaps it has been cropped down so much that detail has been lost? I'd like to see more detail, contrast, and sharpness in the eyes. |
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01/10/2007 10:26:12 AM |
| While eyes are certainly an engaging subject, youre missing some essential elements here. Sharper focus and a more dramatic B&W conversion would bring alot more interest to this shot. Ive given this a 2, but I encourage you to try this a few more times and see if you can improve your result. |
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01/10/2007 08:54:07 AM |
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01/10/2007 06:58:31 AM |
| only eyes? this should be a much sharper image then. Also, for the future, this frame size NEVER does well on DPC. Also, the shot looks like it's floating. A good way of grounding it would be by giving it a border. |
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01/09/2007 10:36:38 PM |
| This is cropped far too much for what I would call a portrait. Show this person's face! |
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01/09/2007 08:16:36 PM |
| leaves alot to be desired. |
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