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05/11/2003 07:59:42 PM |
Its really late so this will be short and sweet :)
Composition - I'd have shown more of the car. It's hard to tell if its he front or the back of the car. I'm assuming its the back though from the water drops coming up from the left of the tire. Too much ground, not enough car.
Technical - Exposure looks pretty good aside from being a little flat. I don't know how much drama or emotion you can put in a picture like this.
Overall - Not a poorly taken pic, but the composition really lacks the necessary framing to make this shot as effective as it could be. Good luck in future stuff....blah blah blah -Inspzil |
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05/06/2003 10:53:05 AM |
| I can't really tell what's supposed to be going on here. |
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05/03/2003 05:54:09 PM |
| 94 325i? how'd you keep the camera dry? |
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05/02/2003 08:18:54 PM |
| This is a very nice snap. I wonder if the ground is also black. Well done! |
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05/02/2003 07:29:16 AM |
the splashing water looks beautiful and gives
it a feel of dynamic.
well done |
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05/01/2003 06:29:36 PM |
| Nice capture of the rain and shiny black paint. I like your subtle BMW tire, the only clue as to what this is. I generally didn't like the "partial car" shots but this one I do. Nice composition. |
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04/30/2003 11:02:39 AM |
3 Beemers so far and count - and a Benz. People just seem to want to show off their flashy motors... (sorry, I'm just a bit jealous) :)
I like the way you've caught the drops coming off the tyres here though. Gives the shot great movement. |
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04/30/2003 10:39:53 AM |
| I like the rain splatters behind the car and the black against the pebble paving. Your BMW hubcap should be more central to the composition (see rule of thirds) Crop on the left to work better with the tail light (right now the cut is at an odd angle with the light) |
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04/30/2003 10:22:33 AM |
| Is that water? BMW *is* the ultimate driving machine, but this shot doesn't do this automobile justice. Would have liked to see an action shot with motion and "stuff" - 4 |
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04/30/2003 09:00:51 AM |
| Well captured and nice and sharp. |
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