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01/30/2003 07:30:50 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Subject
The subject grabs your attention, And definitely meets the challenge!
Sharpness:
focus is excellent, pin sharp
Exposure: Good
Contrast & Color: A little flat, but I think that is more the subject matter than your fault!
Composition
The various elements of the photo would be better balanced within the frame, if you had not got the flat spots on top and bottom. As you look at the photo your eyes are drawn to the subject down the tunnel, clever use of vingetting
Suggestions for improvement
Dont crop the top and bottom flat! I would have preferred a slightly less busy view at the bottom of the tunnel
Overall very creative and well executed.
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01/26/2003 06:37:06 PM |
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01/26/2003 09:01:47 AM |
| stood out from all the other thumbnails, really eye-catching. normally don't like borders but this works out real good. ten. |
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01/26/2003 08:43:22 AM |
| nice circular framing technique |
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01/25/2003 11:29:44 PM |
| Great clarity and definition. Something isn't quite right about the circle inside the rectangle, I think I would either have liked black space all the way around the circle or for it to be more tightly cropped on the left and right. |
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01/25/2003 10:00:53 PM |
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01/24/2003 06:39:21 PM |
| This is a nicely done shot, I like the creativeness with tunnel aspect. Why did you crop part of the effect? Your focus was very crisp and the lighting was good. To be honest though the sign is a bit boring, though you truly tried to liven it up, it still doesn't just jump out and interest me. The technical aspect of the shot is sound though. 7. |
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01/24/2003 06:50:21 AM |
| Clever! Tunnel Exit street, end of the tunnel, tunnel vision... Good use of vignetting. |
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01/23/2003 08:33:06 PM |
| Creative use of vignetting, I think. Also, good focus, colors and lighting. The details are very sharp thoughout the picture. |
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01/23/2003 05:37:11 PM |
| some imagination to get this shot. very well done. |
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01/22/2003 08:53:34 AM |
| looks photoshopped even though it's not..but in any case why choose to do that, why not just do a tigher crop. the tunnel really takes away from an otherwise good pic |
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01/20/2003 11:25:39 PM |
| Great idea! It worked out perfectly. I love this photo. 10 from me. |
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01/20/2003 07:15:38 PM |
| Ok, let me be the hundreth person to question the black circle. I'm guessing it was taken through a piece of card and the DOF provides the blurred edge. If so, well done it looks like post processing. Focus and exposure of the signs is very good. |
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01/20/2003 06:08:33 PM |
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01/20/2003 12:56:23 PM |
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01/20/2003 05:28:01 AM |
| now you're going to make some poor tourist think that the statue of liberty is close to east 39th st . . . |
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01/20/2003 05:15:52 AM |
| Great take on a tough challenge |
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01/19/2003 09:11:59 PM |
| Great idea and beautiful shot. I'm assuming the framing is from the lens.. Cub |
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01/19/2003 07:48:09 PM |
| the border or whatever it is really helps the photo |
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