Winter Day
by jjusa

Comment:
I really like the this portrait, I would just take down the eyes a bit to match the body because even though you want to make the eyes pop out in the a portrait, you shouldn't have them be over powering.

To make the eyes really pop out, try putting a catch light in the shot. Not only does it save you time with photoshopping, but it also is the most capturing thing you can do in a portrait.

Either way, I love everything else in the photograph. Just fix the eyes.

All I have to give is love
by Muppet

Comment:
Really bad photograph, really bad photoshop, really bad composition...but good concept. And concept is almost 99% of what makes a photograph good. Well including all that other stuff. So lets say 50%...

Child of a coal mine
by short_ribs

Comment:
Its a really cool image, but to be honest with ya, i'm not digging the black and white conversion with the color pop in the eyes. Now, if this was in real life where you painted the person black and gray, that would be cool...

but i can tell its photoshoped and i see this to much already... But the composition is amazing.

Being Enzo Maisano...
by hotpasta

Comment:
I really like the idea and the use of putting yourself all over the place doing different things... the only thing that is throwing me off is the gaint head that is only showing eyes at the top. I know it should have a higher meaning, like its the real you that is hidden behind all these mask of things you should be in society or life. But its just distracting.
If I was to do anything to this photo, I would crop in on it with the one of you and then book being the main focus.

Thats just my suggestion.

Live! Tonight! In The Basement!
by mchalmers

Comment:
loving this photo. A+ on using everything and taling a story about yourself.

tinman II
by lowonenergy

Comment:
its a good composition and lighting, my only problem is that there is no mid-tons what so ever. But it could be with what you have on yourself...or a over-sharpning stuff.

One thing for sure, that i would had added was a catch light in your eye.

Photographer Self Portrait
by rio78

Comment:
very nice!

Taking a break after playing basketball
by Pompouspete

Comment:
nope

Finally on Top
by Dufus

Comment:
Very nice self-portrait that tales a story about yourself.

A+

Me.
by sk8t969

Comment:
If i put a camera on a tripod outside my house and took a picture, would that make me a photographer?

Sure...but that wouldn't make me a good photographer.

Sorry, i'm not feeling this at all.