Aquatic Edutainment
by RyShu

Comment:
A little underexposed makes this shot a little too grainy. Cool composition though - love the color difference from water to stone and the curve of the glass is really artsy! Either a longer exposure or a smaller f-stop number would make this shot a winner!

Scholastic education
by Montague

Comment:
Great composition idea - love the colors - it looks cool! Most would have been tempted to black and white it - but keeping the gold tone makes it really enticing. I think that you could have improved this shot by cropping out the glare on the top of the book - it is distracting. Either a crop of a higher angle would have accomplished the same thing. Good job!

Shelf of knowledge
by paulb_17

Comment:
You may want to crop in more on your subject - fill your frame and try a different angle. Just books all in a line, with flash washing out some of the titles, doesn't do it. The idea is good, just the artwork is missing. Try different focal lengths and/or different angles and/or cropping.

The first schools in the world
by jnpalma

Comment:
Good cropping. It is a little "foggy" looking - too much light maybe? Really great location for a shot and framed really well... just missing the WOW factor.

homework
by hamsandwich

Comment:
Too much light on the book - and not much of a story told - your subject does not appear to be looking at the book or concentration on what she will write next... the focus is not sharp or clear on the subject either - but it was a good idea - keep it up

"The Happiest Days Of Our Lives"
by dayberry

Comment:
Strange title... hmmm, well the morion blur is a little too much, but kind of works with the sepia. Great cropping job - leaves you wanting to see more... and a really good composition idea!

Learning to ARTICULATE: Putting into words or expression
by emmylou

Comment:
Creative use of lighting - pulling her away from the wall would eliminate that unseemly shadow. Creative composition and good focus. Nice angle and good cropping!

HOMEWORK !!! #@#§% homework...
by np22sa

Comment:
Keen lighing! - Great composition idea. A little weak in focus, but nice use of black and white. Very good depth and plenty to look at without any distractions. The only thing I don't like is the title - she doesn't look profane. High scores!

All Aboard
by riversong

Comment:
Good composition. I really like the mountain view in the background and the cropping is good. The only problem is too much light. It washes out a lot of the detail in the picture and makes the lines less clear. Also a second sooner and you wouldn't have to play hide and seek to see the kid getting on the bus.

Chemistry
by jodiecoston

Comment:
Great use of color - love the depth, the focus and the reflection! Just a very pretty shot!