Last Call of the Day
by Coley

Comment:
cute..good job capturing those teenage moments..

Into the Sun
by I Enjoy Ham

Comment:
watch out for sun glares.. its not often they are desirable..

Aiden
by cowcollect

Comment:
its too washed out imo and the focus is off.. the background doesnt help much either..

sunkissed
by mcfly707

Comment:
the head on flash is almost never a good choice..trade it in for a longer exposure and perhaps close down your iris (for dof). the size on the picture doesnt help it either.. also remember to keep an eye on your models look..dab the sweat ect.. sorry for the bluntness but i hope these comment help you in later challenges.

CANDY
by Philos

Comment:
very colorful..good job.

Salvadoreña
by hopelessoptimist

Comment:
que senorita mas bella.. como que tiene un parecido a Selena, no? siento que la foto esta un poco fuera de foco y que el fondo necesita mas detalle..su pose tambien parece medio incomoda para ella.. espero ver mas de tus fotos de moda y estilo!

translation- what a pretty girl. she kindda looks like Selena. it seems the picture is a bit oof and that there should be something more interesting in the background her pose also looks somewhat uncomfortable for her. id like to see more of your fashion pictures.

Portrait
by Desember

Comment:
nice job.. pretty lighting very nice and subtle. i like how her hands are in her shirt sleeves. bumping up..

Autumn
by steinar

Comment:
reviewing my scores and im bumping this up.. its a great fashion shot very beautifully done..

Like Her Mom
by spydr

Comment:
finally a picture of a child that doesnt look like it was taken with a one time use camera. good job with the lighting.

N O S T A L G I A
by librodo

Comment:
great picture as always.. but two things i dont like. her stare is a bit too blank..not as in shes thinking about something but as in shes forces to look at a mark cause thats where her eyes look good, and the fly-aways in front of her forehead. otherwise its a great picture and i think it will place high..good job!