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| 06/23/2004 07:34:44 AM |
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| 06/23/2004 07:33:33 AM |
Culver's Graduation Goes Without a Hitch!by moviemanComment: Boring, a poorly composed snapshot, no focal point, no sense of when or where this is without the headline. This would be boring in a slideshow for family, let alone a photo competition. |
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| 06/23/2004 07:32:09 AM |
The Man Who Made Our City Cleanby akshaComment: That's not really a headline, keep it topical, specific and active. Maybe "Streetsweeping Back on Track After Strike" or "No Benefits in Sight for Kuala Lumpur's Laborers" |
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| 06/23/2004 07:30:07 AM |
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| 06/23/2004 07:29:27 AM |
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| 06/23/2004 07:27:58 AM |
The summer has started and children are playing around…by unguzovComment: This could have met the challenge if you had put more thought into your headline. As it is, it's just a funny snapshot. Something like: "New Statues at Hyde Park Attract Young Visitors" Try to think what the article accompanying it might be, or what story you are trying to tell. |
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| 06/23/2004 07:22:32 AM |
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| 06/23/2004 07:21:10 AM |
Goverment Tax Kills Off City Centre Shopping.by kevrobertsonComment: Maybe in a 1950 newspaper, why so grainy and high contrast? This could do with a bit more focus, and might even have done better in color. Even when taking a scene like this, it's important to think about your focal point, which right now is the bench at the bottom center. The tree midcenter would have been a better choice, since it would pull the eye to the whole image rather than down to the bottom. |
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| 06/23/2004 07:17:30 AM |
Policewoman Chases Down Robbery Suspectby bongoComment: Hmm, not sure is we'd actually see this one in a newspaper, but I guess it meets all the requirements. I would like a teensy bit more focus, right now it looks almost like you tool the Blur tool to it. |
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| 06/23/2004 07:15:48 AM |
Flooding Continuesby weavercComment: Good. Maybe a more specific headline? Adding the town name might give it a bit more impact. |
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