Curves in Glass
by ploogiea

Comment by jmsetzler:
= 8

Early Primary Colors
by ploogiea

Comment by jmsetzler:
= 5

Curves in Glass
by ploogiea

Comment by Becky:
I like the light creates contrast in your photo.

Curves in Glass
by ploogiea

Comment by Kavey:
I really like the composition in this image. It's incredibly simple yet very elegant. For me the weakness is that the object that I'm assuming is made of glass doesn't really say glass to me - the qualities of the glass itself aren't really explored or evident.
Lighting is a little low for my tastes but I appreciate that's perhaps a deliberate decision to strike a certain mood.

Reflection on a Revolution in Transportation
by ploogiea

Comment by sher:
Greetings from the Critique Club! :)

I love the title of this photo and the sepia tint works really well. I'm very impressed that you were able to pick up such a great reflection without getting your reflection as well.

Just a couple of things that I think would have helped make this a stronger shot. First...I think if you cropped more off the left side and bottom, (basically, just getting the wheel and not as much of the tire) it would make the reflection more of a focal point. Second...as I said earlier, I really like the sepia tint you've used, but I'm not as sure about the graininess. I think sepia with a sharp focus would have make a much stronger photo.

I think the concept is wonderful and just a couple of minor adjustments would have made this good photo great.

Good luck in future challenges!

Sher :)

Early Primary Colors
by ploogiea

Comment by crabappl3:
Nice leading line to have the viewer see the blue slide in the middle. I think that a closer in shot without the clutter around the equipment might have made for a stronger shot. Colors and saturation are good.

Early Primary Colors
by ploogiea

Comment by tomzinho:
nice find, i like the framing of the other playground in the background. lighting is just okay - i wish you could have found an angle that didn't have some shadows crossing the lit parts. overall, however, its very fun (but no kids?)

Early Primary Colors
by ploogiea

Comment by hughletheren:
well spotted

Curves in Glass
by ploogiea

Comment by albright1:
Nice and abstract. I like the human quality of that vase. It's got veins.

Curves in Glass
by ploogiea

Comment by BobsterLobster:
I really like this, but it's a shame it's so dark.