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Early Primary Colors
Early Primary Colors
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Challenge: Primary Colors (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus C-4000Z
Location: Minneapolis, MN
Date: May 10, 2003
Aperture: F2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: .003125
Date Uploaded: May 10, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 70 out of 99
Avg (all users): 5.1719
Avg (commenters): 5.5714
Avg (participants): 5.3026
Avg (non-participants): 4.9808
Views since voting: 734
Votes: 128
Comments: 8
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 05/21/2003 12:17:40 PM
Critique Club

Hi there, nice representation of the challenge.

Composition is very good with the placement of the slide in the background, I am thinking getting in a little closer might have improved the composition by getting rid of some distracting elements.

Color
There is something off, looks a bit too pink/purple(esp. in the bark), did you change the colors/saturation? or does your camera give you this type of cast?

cropping and rotating a couple of pixels CCW would help with the tilt.

Good title, suits the image well.

Good luck with future challenges!

Paige
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/16/2003 10:44:54 AM
Interesting. Great eye for color. I wish it were a bit more in plumb.
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 05/16/2003 06:15:49 AM
You got all the primary colors here, good idea. You even got them out the background there:-)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/15/2003 07:01:26 PM
Great colors and perspective. A touch brighter would help in my opinion. the horizon line is off a bit goin up from right to left.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/13/2003 10:47:27 AM
= 5
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 05/12/2003 10:41:01 AM
Nice leading line to have the viewer see the blue slide in the middle. I think that a closer in shot without the clutter around the equipment might have made for a stronger shot. Colors and saturation are good.
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 05/12/2003 06:47:02 AM
nice find, i like the framing of the other playground in the background. lighting is just okay - i wish you could have found an angle that didn't have some shadows crossing the lit parts. overall, however, its very fun (but no kids?)
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 05/11/2003 11:54:42 PM
well spotted
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