Gunslinger
by lykofos

Comment by andrewt:
I wished you had used a better background 6

Uptown Girl
by lykofos

Comment by Denise:
ok, now I have Billy Joel stuck in my head, love the texture of the surrounding building

The Train Conductor
by lykofos

Comment by lykofos:
Edit: deleted this post and added the info to the "photographer's comments" section above instead.

Message edited by author 2008-06-08 14:10:25.

The Train Conductor
by lykofos

Comment by Zeissman:
need a much tighter crop

Uptown Girl
by lykofos

Comment by dafletchr:
Nice shot and processing. For some reason I would have liked to have seen her face though - maybe because she is surrounded by the coldness of concrete. Her face may have brought more life into the shot.

Uptown Girl
by lykofos

Comment by hotpasta:
she obviously didn't want her photo taken right? I just wish there was eye contact of some kind

The Train Conductor
by lykofos

Comment by JerseyGenie:
I like the bright happy model against the dark background.

The Train Conductor
by lykofos

Comment by Drummond:
Might possibly work even better if it was a full length portrait.

The Train Conductor
by lykofos

Comment by Jason_Cross:
I like the concept here and the location.

The Train Conductor
by lykofos

Comment by wehrmacher:
Beautiful young lady. I like the several contrasts and comparisons. Soft smooth warm skin, vs the hard cold rusty Iron of the engine. The wear on the jeans compares to the wear of the engine. The bright red of her blouse compared to the dull red/brown of the rust. Does the model happen to be 36? No, I didn't thinks so.

As the pretty model should be the main subject, I would have cropped it, or zoomed in, a bit to bring focus to her. It could by my monitor, but I think she could use a little more light under the bill of her cap.

I really like this shot.