Ride!!!
by Judi

Comment:
***Greetings from the Critique club***

Judi, first off i must say i have always liked your work, i frequent your profile often

after looking over your photo closely i have came to the conclusion there is nothing i would do to change it or any advice to give that would improve it,
so we are going to look at the things that i like the most

first off, the color is perfect, I love the sky, and the crop, you put more ground and sky, thats great,
another thing i really like is the dirt on the tire, it just show this wasnt just a set up that bike was actually being ridden. there is great formations in the clouds and the textur in the dirt is fine,

you dof is perfect, this is an amazing photo, and im shocked it didnt score higher,

Great shot keep shooting.

Pheonix Palm tree leaves
by train

Comment:
***Greetings from the Critique club***

First of i must say thank you for entering the challenge thats what keeps this site going.

so lets look at your photo,
shows lots of lines an deep groovs, with color
your shadows are dark, your composition is good,
to me this photo is a good shot.
those little yellowish circles draw my attetion away from the photo though, is that actually on the plan or is that becase of post processing bringing out the greens,

so overall there isnt much i could say about im provment on this photo, its just an average snap shot, doesnt really make me go wow,
tehcnically its fine,

good job keep shooting

Lava Channels
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
***Greetings from the critique club***

alright, lets see,
first off i must say, when i first saw your image i was like huh?
then i thought i was like lava, until i read your description, then i realized what it was.

I enjoy the color, its dark but its bright at the same time, which really adds to the texture,
it has great texture, i like how the lines are not from front to rear, their more like front left to rear right, which is good, i would have knocked you if it was just straight back,
ok, so your color, its great, except i think it would have been better if it was consistent throughout, the back has a big dark spot that as i read your commments cost you a few votes

over all i enjoy your photo, there is just some issues with the consistency of the color, and maybe a bigger DOF

Rough
by hi131

Comment:
***Greetings from the critique club***

firs off i would like to say thankyou for entering the challenge, thats what keeps this site going

alright,

technically this photo shows good texture and a good color combination,

i dont see things you could correct with your photo or post processing,
the one thing i see is there is no DOF, its just a full picture of tree bark, not to interesting but it did score a 5.6
maybe if you shot from an angle up or down the tree so we could have seen into the crevases of the bark that would have added some more dof texture
so overall its a good shot you got a not to bad score, next challenge think a little more creative,

Corked
by temba

Comment:
***Greetings from the Critique club***

First off i must say thank you for entering the challenge its what keeps this site goings
second this is a great photograph,
you used good deph of field, good color combination
i enjoy the texture in the corks, and the color of the red wine that has seeped into them over the months or years as it may be

one thing i notice i would think caused you a few votes is you croped off the top of the cork, if it was completly round it would have added a more deeper feeling to the photo.

over all this is a good composed shot, no real big faults in your photography, its just the subject is a little boring, here on dpc its hard to find something that all the voters are going to enjoy

Untitled
by RyShu

Comment:
***Greetings From the Critique club***
First off i must say thank you for entering the challenge its what makes dpc what it is today

to start, i must say i like your photograph, it puts a turn on the norm around here.

you composition is good, the rule of thirds was used, your backgroud coencides with the picture. i really like how the doll is dark and scary and the background is a light normal setting really adds to the photo.
its well focused and shows great texture and detail, perfect dof, you can tell what it is in the backgroudn but it take you a second, i really have nothing to say bad abot the photo, to me it perfect, it should have scored higher, people dont put into thought the time and effort you put into this photo.

Great job.

Eye was framed
by jdannels

Comment:
***Greetings from the critique club***

First off i have to say thank you for entering the challenge its what keeps this site going.

First off i must say i really enjoy your photograph

this is what i like the most first this really show you took the time and energy to creat a mignificant photo. and your score reflects that.

I dont really have any negatives, other then i think it would have been nice if you were in focus a litle bit more, but im sure thats easier said then done, i like the background,

what may have added to your score would have been a colorful shirt say yellow or red, that would be great.

sustains:
Great ideas, passion for your work, great discription of the photograph, and entering challenges for DPC

A Girl's Favorite Toy
by ghcstr

Comment:
***Greetings from the Critique club***

First off i just have to say thank you for entering the challenge.

Ok first off, this is a cute photgraph dont get me wrong,

it does not meet the challenge, i know she plays with the dog like a toy but its not a toy its living creature,

so lets get to the technicals

The hair over her eyes is really distracting, its not that sharp,
next time, compose here a little beter, make sure you can see her whole face, it would have been cuter if both her and the dog were facing you like side by side,

a little post processing would have been nice,

over all you gave a good attempt to a photograph, you could have tried a little harder though.

Refractions, Reflections and Angles
by Beetle

Comment:
***Greetings From the Critique Club***

First off i have to say thank you for entering the challenge, its what keeps this site going.

Firt off, I like you photograph

Your composition is well, I like how you didnt center the white and blue sides, like how the corners line up to the opposite colors
what i dont like is the image in the glas, it makes it look likeits not focused, it draws you attetion away from the actually meaning of the photograph
and i just noticed, you did something to the blue, maybe that is the texture of what you used that was blue but its really pixelated like you added to much blue, and in the top corner is almost black, those really draw my attetion away from the actual subject of your photo.

Over all, you have a great idea, you put a twit on it we havent really seen here yet,
but the blue and the black caused you some votes,

Keep shooting

Bounce with me!
by David.C

Comment:
**Greetings from the Critique club**

first off i must thank you for taking the time and entering the challnge,

Your photo, To me i think you used the rule of thirds well, tiger is in a good spot empahsizing his face, (its better then just taking a whole picture of him)

I think you could have used a black backgroud and really made his color stick out well, it would show more dimension also

the photo isnt all that sharp, could be sharper but not too much.

overall i think your photo is ethicaly composed well, but its just not a great subject, kinda just blah

Good just keep shooting