***Greetings From the Critique Club***
First off i have to say thank you for entering the challenge, its what keeps this site going.
Firt off, I like you photograph
Your composition is well, I like how you didnt center the white and blue sides, like how the corners line up to the opposite colors
what i dont like is the image in the glas, it makes it look likeits not focused, it draws you attetion away from the actually meaning of the photograph
and i just noticed, you did something to the blue, maybe that is the texture of what you used that was blue but its really pixelated like you added to much blue, and in the top corner is almost black, those really draw my attetion away from the actual subject of your photo.
Over all, you have a great idea, you put a twit on it we havent really seen here yet,
but the blue and the black caused you some votes,
Keep shooting |