Danger & Treasure
by Adrian Tung

Comment:
Sorry but this is way too dark for me.

Big Bucks!
by basia03

Comment:
There is a major problem here. The range of exposure that you are trying to accomodate is just too much with the result that the shadows are too dark and the highlights too light. Try this. Set up using a tripod. Take an image exposed for the shadows and then one exposed for the highlight. You can then merge the two and you'll have an image that caters for the full dynamic range.

Saving For A Rainy Day
by GolferDDS

Comment:
One slight criticism. Just a bit too tigh against the left hand border otherwise great.

Or the lack of it ..
by Khalid

Comment:
Sharpness is an issue. Perhaps the same idea on an older or more weathered hand would work better.

Savings Account
by alanfreed

Comment:
I think you are let down a bit by the angle you chose. Your flash has crated the odd hot spot reflections and the shadows on your background are not particulary pleasing. Nice DOF and focus.

Gold
by melking

Comment:
There is DOF problem. The iamge is not capturing the lustre of gold and the crop is distracting. I mean why only on the right? I would also suggest that this is more about iron pyrite (Fool's gold) and diamonds.

The paper millionares Bible
by Thorsgodhi

Comment:
There sems to be a cast. Perhaps your white balance is out? I think that you have caused of DOF problem for yourself by not having the newspaper completely flat. Studio work requires a huge amount of attention to detail.

Second Mortgage!
by Firstrich1

Comment:
Perhaps eveness of the light reflection on the writing could add. The odd thing in the bottom right is distracting. Nice even tone in the red though.

Law of Supply and Demand
by Artifacts

Comment:
Obviously set up - not that that is wrong but the image could have been cropped a lot tighter.

If Scrooge McDuck knew that "Time Is money"
by aKiwi

Comment:
There are a lot of reflections causing little hots spots. The reference is lost on me.