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08/04/2011 02:47:52 AM |
Originally posted by sfalice:
waaay too cute! And some crafty work here too to make those musical notes.
Okay, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and offer some composing thoughts. You have set a delightful scene here, but it has a lot of information. More, perhaps that is needed to tell your story.
Those musical notes. Perfect. Now. Think about cropping the top to just above the right 'blue note' - then think about cropping the bottom to just above the models knee.
Then, to tidy up a bit, crop the left side to just the left of the pink note.
There. Does that also tell the story you want to say?
Okay, Alice's lesson for the day is over. (Joking, of course)
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thanx a lot .. its the most helpful comment i have ever had .. i would love to have more of these lessons ^_^ :) |
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08/02/2011 04:22:06 AM |
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07/30/2011 04:21:06 PM |
waaay too cute! And some crafty work here too to make those musical notes.
Okay, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and offer some composing thoughts. You have set a delightful scene here, but it has a lot of information. More, perhaps that is needed to tell your story.
Those musical notes. Perfect. Now. Think about cropping the top to just above the right 'blue note' - then think about cropping the bottom to just above the models knee.
Then, to tidy up a bit, crop the left side to just the left of the pink note.
There. Does that also tell the story you want to say?
Okay, Alice's lesson for the day is over. (Joking, of course)
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07/30/2011 07:49:27 AM |
| Looks like a snapshot... photo doesn't say anything, maybe the "notes" across the background should be strung to look like they are coming out of the radio? Christmas coffee cup and shorts and sunglasses don't jive. Pay more attention to detail... what's that glob of black stuff on ground at leg of table. Lighting is too harsh and washes out the detail in the shoe and leg of subject. Crop out a couple inches at top to get rid of the "too bright" background. |
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07/29/2011 09:38:54 AM |
| You could have a string comming down from one of the paperclips, so it looks like the music is literally comming from the radio. |
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07/27/2011 01:31:46 PM |
| Cute idea. A little over-exposed. |
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07/27/2011 12:58:30 PM |
| great old transistor radio and sneakers. the details make this. |
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