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12/15/2010 10:05:39 AM |
| I think the in-challenge comments were pretty accurate. (Except for Grog's. Why he thought this was a celebrity is a mystery to me!) The image appears somewhat flat and definitely needs a little cranking up in PP. I tried some of PSP's clarify on this, and it did help to give it a little pop and dimension. As Cory suggested, some saturation, contrast and sharpening (in addition to some clarify) would certainly help. The composition is a bit static as well. I might have composed this with a little more room at the top and more free space on the left side, to give her something to dance into. As far as the dancing, I agree it's not obvious she's dancing, both from the odd position of her arms, and the fact that she's wearing a coat and hat. Even though she surely was dancing at the time, it is not strongly conveyed by the image. |
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12/10/2010 08:56:15 AM |
| Grog open club. (No, not club to hit things with, club where people pay to dance and make Grog money!) Is place to be seen for all fancy-people. Famous female Miley Cyrock shows off latest hot moves on dance floor. |
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12/08/2010 08:43:58 AM |
While this isn't a bad image by any means, you have several issues -
Contrast/brightness, the image is a touch low contrast and dark.
Sharpness, you both could have sharpened more and a faster shutter would have benefited the shot, as her hands are blurred from movement...
Subject, I don't really see this telling me a story or making me ask questions, really, it's more - why is this here?
Best of luck! :) |
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12/08/2010 03:47:14 AM |
| i really can't tell that she's dancing. i only knew she was because of the title. |
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