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Challenge: Your Corner of the World III (Basic Editing)
Collection: 2009 Challenges
Camera: Nikon D40
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: Donna's house
Date: Oct 18, 2009
Aperture: f.10
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Emotive, Rural
Date Uploaded: Oct 20, 2009

One of my clients/friends, Donna, a housepainter with an interesting history. Scottish by birth, she grew up in Montreal, attended Trinity in Dublin, has taught at Concordia University, and has been an excellent housepainter for the last 25 years.

Now in her 60s, she owns two ginormous Clydesdale mares (see Fifi in my Horse portfolio), three Standard Poodles, and about 30 barn cats. I caught her with a camera while she was taking a well-earned break with one of her Standard Poodle stud dogs, Sid.

This shot was not staged in any way, unless you count that I did suggest we go sit by the water and that Sid be close by! I caught the normally very camera-shy Donna in a lovely pour shot. Thanks, Donna! :-)

pp: RAW-TIFF, curves, brightness/contrast, saturation, resize, usm, sharpen edges, save for web

Statistics
Place: 131 out of 160
Avg (all users): 4.8681
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.7746
Avg (non-participants): 4.9085
Views since voting: 597
Views during voting: 342
Votes: 235
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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10/31/2009 03:12:19 AM


Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
A bit of a snapshot, but one of a moment in time and in your corner of the world. Nice relaxed feel to the image.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
Difficult because of the Challenge, but this scene would likely be enhanced by a nice shallow DOF, but again - because of the Challenge, you need the context of 'your part of the world'. In saying that, I think the image/scene is more about a moment and also a slight candid and not really about showcasing your part of the world.

Composition wise: shame the dog's tail is chopped, but the cropping at the bottom, where your knee is visible, could have been improved. Also, depending how much more you had to work with, including more of the background in would have been better for this Challenge, in my opinion.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
132/159 probably reflects that most didn't get a sense of 'your part of the world' strongly from this image, which your score of 4.86 also indicates. However, the somewhat 'snapshootishness' of the image probably pulled it down as well.

Average of 5.0 from your mirrors a few of your comments, but certainly not all of them.

Summary
Not a strong meet of the Challenge and from reading your Photographer's Comments, this image probably has a different meaning to you.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/28/2009 05:26:24 AM
How absolutely delightful! What a true "corner of the world" kind of shot. Hope Donna likes it!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/25/2009 09:07:23 PM
And a Kiwi one (weather permiting!)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/24/2009 07:26:26 AM
HA! This makes me smile!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
10/23/2009 09:38:13 PM
Good exposure
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10/21/2009 10:37:10 AM
Too much going on. I prob would have taken a shot without the dog..
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10/21/2009 09:40:21 AM
Certainly portrays a relaxing afternoon on the lakefront. Comes off as a snapshot to me, I'm afraid.
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