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05/11/2004 07:23:09 PM |
Great use of DOF for this shot. Love the central theme of rust in this composition as well as the continuity you keep in the shot with most of the pieces extending out of the frame of view (notable exception in top right corner of the photo). I wish you hadn't captured the shadow in the lower left corner but overall this is a very strong photo. |
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05/11/2004 09:06:09 AM |
Woudl like to see the foreground more in focus. |
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05/10/2004 10:44:13 AM |
The subject is mostly well lit and the the diffused background provides good contrast to expose the geometry. The shadow and what appears to be a burned out match in the lower left hand corner detract.
The point of view and composition are the larger distractions for me.
A 4. |
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05/10/2004 07:01:01 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 3
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 6.25 Dick
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05/09/2004 06:07:48 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/09/2004 03:07:29 AM |
good DoF and very strong composition...well done |
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05/06/2004 06:40:18 PM |
Handsome composition -- I like it, but the shadow in the lower left corner really detracts for me. |
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05/06/2004 10:19:08 AM |
This is so nice for this challenge. |
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05/06/2004 09:34:41 AM |
Nice focus and nice light. The shadow at the bottom is a distraction. :( Good luck. |
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05/06/2004 08:41:33 AM |
Shadow is distracting in the lower left hand corner. Good solution for challenge. |
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05/06/2004 04:09:14 AM |
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