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''EVEN so my bloody thoughts, with violent pace, Shall ne'er look back, ne'er ebb to humble love''
''EVEN so my bloody thoughts, with violent pace, Shall ne'er look back, ne'er ebb to humble love''
cdrice


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Even II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Location: Main Stage, South Mountain CC, Phoenix AZ
Date: Apr 20, 2008
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 640
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Emotive, Photojournalism
Date Uploaded: Apr 22, 2008

Photographed during photo call for "Othello" at South Mountain Community College in Phoenix, AZ.

Actors are the amazing talented Roland Zee (foreground, Othello) and Jenn Rooks (background, Iago). They actually made Shakespeare tolerable to watch (which is huge compliment coming from me, as I cannot stand Shakespeare.) :P

I don't know how well people will receive the EVEN concept of it... But there are two people in the shot, which is an even number -- and the Othello quote has the word "EVEN" in it -- seems like a creative way to get me back into a challenge at least... Bah, I'll see what I get.

Shot handheld, 50mm/1.8 lens, at iso 640, 1/30 and f/4.5

RAW/NEF -> Lightroom
Basic:
WB custom (2750K, tint-12)
Exposure -0.10
Recovery -> +90
Blacks -> 8
Presence:
Clarity -> 50
Vibrance -> +50
Saturation -> +20
Tone Curve:
Point Curve: Strong Contrast
Noise Reduction:
Luminance -> 75
Color -> 50
Sharpening:
Amount -> 85
Detail -> 50
Masking -> 90
Crop (custom aspect ratio)
Export:
JPEG, 75 quality, sRGB, constrained 640x640


Statistics
Place: 92 out of 108
Avg (all users): 4.5294
Avg (commenters): 3.9091
Avg (participants): 4.2051
Avg (non-participants): 4.6061
Views since voting: 875
Views during voting: 346
Votes: 204
Comments: 13
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05/05/2008 02:39:40 PM
Greetings from the critique club!

The first thing I'd like to point out is something that's been said previously. There isn't a strong tie to challenge. I think this is where you got dinged the most I am afraid. While your quote makes reference to the word even, remember we are looking at your photograph for the evenness. Yes there are two people but that's about it. Anyways, on to the rest.

The actor portraying Othello, without the actress behind him would have made a terrifc shot. She isn't blurred enough to fade into the background and appears visually stapled onto his shoulder.

Fairly sharp image considering you shot a slow shutter speed. (I have this same lens and I would recommend shooting at faster than 1/75 of a second.)

Good detail in the face and nice capture of his expression. I like the contrast between the back drop and the colors of his shirt.

Final analysis? A pretty good shot unfortunately entered in a challenge where it didn't work. It easy to feel compelled to enter a shot for the sake on entering but be aware that people are going to comment on how your shot doesn't fit the challenge than how it works photographically if you shoehorn your entries. (I know I am soooo guilty of entering when I know I have a cruddy shot). Anyways, live and learn.

C
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/29/2008 04:36:31 PM
sure there is even in the title, but it dosent translate well into the picture.
04/29/2008 05:36:00 AM
sorry what would this image say without its title.
04/28/2008 10:19:34 AM
Great facial expression. Quite good depth of field - would perhaps have the rear person less in focus though.

Hate the shirt!!!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/28/2008 05:58:41 AM
without the caption this photo wouldn't make sense with the challenge.
04/27/2008 01:21:21 PM
I think she has a knife dude. You might get wacked.
04/26/2008 05:43:01 PM
Nice image, but a stretch making it meet the challenge.

Message edited by author 2008-05-01 16:29:48.
04/24/2008 03:26:56 PM
Great picture, but how does it relate to EVEN????
04/24/2008 10:35:05 AM
I don't really get it... It looks like a scene out of a R. Kelly video.
04/23/2008 05:43:11 PM
I kinda feel like "even" was just stuck into the title, I dont get the concept of the shot
04/23/2008 07:50:47 AM
Good photo if part of a documentary project, bad photo to stand by itself.
04/23/2008 06:00:31 AM
Yeah i dont see even at all
04/23/2008 05:47:19 AM
i dont see anything even in this photo. yeah the title says the word even in it, but it has nothing to show.


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