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03/26/2004 01:34:36 AM |
| Poor you Vtruan you didn't even see the beauty you held at the desivement moment of clicking your shutter. Its a shame to because you could have has a real tried and true beauty. Look at the painting in the back ground the way your daughters hair and face is done up and being of a soft nature flow beautifully with the painting but you cut off the girls head in the portrait. No vtruan your mistake is not to realize the beauty of that poster and have used it to your advantage. I am sorry most of these people know shit about the back ground here its so beautiful and would have completed your image if you had cropped it right by placing the head inside and maybe moving over just enough to see more of it contrasting with your daughters soft characters but hey next time you'll see it maybe. Thank you for the image. |
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03/22/2004 02:10:55 AM |
Thanks for the great consistent comments. It was a candid of her at her ballet studio. She has some cherry candy before I shot her, no make-up/lipsstick. Yes the poster in the back should have been removed. I removed the foot below her chin, but didn't have time to finish removing the rest do to the whole family being flu ridden all week and didn't get back to it. Van
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03/21/2004 04:39:33 PM |
| Not sure about the background |
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03/21/2004 01:00:55 PM |
| She's so pretty- she's such a little girl, this is great- the hair clip for some reason I really like- the poster's a little bit distracting but I really love it 9 |
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03/21/2004 09:19:17 AM |
| my only criticism would be the background, but the picture makes up for that. |
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03/21/2004 02:41:04 AM |
| I like the catchlights in the eyes. They bring a real sparkle to this young lady's face. I also like the Degas you've used in the background. That adds a special dimension to your portrait. |
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03/20/2004 07:01:28 PM |
| the angle of the picture in the background is a little distracting, but the look you captured makes up for it. good job 7 |
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03/20/2004 10:24:40 AM |
| The picture behind the subject distracts from her beautiful face. Nice skin tone and details. |
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03/19/2004 10:37:45 PM |
| The background is disturbing. But a nice portrait with nice soft light. |
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03/18/2004 06:40:34 PM |
| Great expression, lighting and POV. The background picture is distracting- looks better to me if I simply crop the left side just enough to lose the frame. The color is a little overdone (particularly the red). That said, this is still one of my favorites. Should be in the top 20 easily. |
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03/18/2004 08:40:47 AM |
| very cute model. background is a bit distracting and the focus on her eyes isn't as sharp as i would like to see. |
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03/18/2004 06:34:33 AM |
| lovely girl, nice shot. distracting background. |
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03/17/2004 06:28:28 PM |
| This is a lovely portrait of a beautiful young lady and I love the concept here of having the painting in the background to which the subject is set against. I do, however, think there are improvements that can be made. First, I'm wondering if the painting has real relevence to the subject, in terms of, likeness or some kind of similarity. Also, I don't like the fact that the head of the subject in the painting was cut off. I do love the pose of your litte woman, and she is darling, but I would have preferred crisper focus on her face (it appears that the focus is better on the side of her face) and I also would have preferred that she wasn't wearing the shiny chrome barrette and red pony tail holder, both of which I find distracting. And also (sorry this is so long :), I think she should be wearing a colored blouse that matches better with the painting above and a color more subdued than the one she is wearing, which is bolder and does'nt match her lipstick or the painting. I hope this helps. 8 |
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03/17/2004 03:44:45 PM |
| The picture in the background is REALLY distracting. |
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03/17/2004 12:15:18 PM |
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03/17/2004 10:42:51 AM |
| Nice shot of Krissie, but I'd have preferred it without the painting in the background. |
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03/16/2004 06:34:51 PM |
| Marvelous expression. A great photo, but just a little grainy. (maybe from resizing for posting.) |
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03/16/2004 09:47:14 AM |
| The shot reminds me something more candid than a portrait. The thing in the background is very distracting. My eyes kept trying to figure out what it was other than focusing on the girl. |
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03/16/2004 06:17:14 AM |
| Exceptionally well done. Kudos to the model. NIce color and composition. |
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03/16/2004 05:51:47 AM |
| The lighting is good, the pose is good, the angle is good, but the painting hanging in the background is a little distracting and throws off the balance for me. |
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03/16/2004 02:50:22 AM |
| Lovely shot.... nice eyes.... 6 for me |
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03/15/2004 09:08:47 PM |
| very beautiful what a lovely child |
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03/15/2004 08:11:16 PM |
| portrait subject is beautiful... just a shame about the backgroun.... |
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03/15/2004 04:31:49 PM |
nice profile set in her environment. her soft expression send wow to those darling eyes of hers.
perfect profile position. |
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03/15/2004 10:44:13 AM |
| With an excellent model like this why did you stick her in front of an out of focus painting of someone else? Or was this intentional - is this her in the background? But having to ask that question negates the harmony and beauty of the model's pose. A 7 when it might have been an 8 or 9. |
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03/15/2004 09:43:43 AM |
| I love the expression here.I don't normally like to see little ones wearing makeup but it was a good idea for this shot (and maybe you didn't even put makeup on her - if not, she has great colour in her lips). I like the use of negative space as well. Good luck! |
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03/15/2004 07:58:35 AM |
| What a beauty. Unfortunately the princess in the background takes away from the princess in the foreground. The blank tan wall would have been a much cleaner background and aded to her color! BOL You stil got a good rating from me. |
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03/15/2004 05:41:12 AM |
| Pretty girl, nice natural looking pose and good color. Background is a bother. |
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03/15/2004 05:22:11 AM |
| Very good. Might have liked to see a bit more of the painting in the BG, as I think it would tie into the subject well. Just a comment |
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03/15/2004 03:01:30 AM |
| excellent shot of the subject - poster detracts my eye away from your lovely composition. |
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03/15/2004 01:49:32 AM |
| great frame-within-a-frame with the poster in the background! |
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03/15/2004 01:41:29 AM |
| This is a lovely picture, nicely lit. Perhaps it would have been better (really great) without the picture hanging on the wall in the background. Maybe you had to put the speed up to meet the lighting conditions, so there is a little chromatic noise but it doesn't detract - NeatImage would remove it if it bothered you! |
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03/14/2004 10:01:28 PM |
| The girl is really sweet and the pose and angle too, is that thing in the background that is a bit distracting, I wish you would blur that a bit in photoshop... |
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03/14/2004 07:47:54 PM |
| your model looks very much at ease and comfortable posing...the composition is good...catchlights are good...the picture in the backgound really draws the attention away from your model though... |
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03/14/2004 07:46:27 PM |
| Nice shot....there's some pixel problems in the eyes and mouth. Just to let you know. perhaps it could be caused by many things. But, I rate you above average. Nice photo over all. |
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03/14/2004 07:08:48 PM |
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