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Challenge: Closing (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: Spare Bedroom
Date: Sep 11, 2007
Aperture: f/16
ISO: 1/80
Shutter: 200
Galleries: Emotive, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Sep 11, 2007

I saw the slanted light in our spare bedroom, and I thought of a line from Desert Places, by Robert Frost, "and night falling fast, oh, fast", only I falsely remembered it as "light falling fast, oh, fast". But I figured I'd better go with a title that more closely explains the kind of closing I'm illustrating.

I did not convert this a duotone - that's the actual colors. Actually, I did not do much post-processing - just some USM and a tiny bit of levels. I don't know why I'm bothering to comment, like anyone is going to care about this photo. But I like it, and I hope at least someone else does, too.

Here's the poem:

Snow falling and night falling fast, oh, fast
In a field I looked into going past,
And the ground almost covered smooth in snow,
But a few weeds and stubble showing last.

The woods around it have it—it is theirs.
All animals are smothered in their lairs.
I am too absent-spirited to count;
The loneliness includes me unawares.

And lonely as it is, that loneliness
Will be more lonely ere it will be less—
A blanker whiteness of benighted snow
With no expression, nothing to express.

They cannot scare me with their empty spaces
Between stars—on stars where no human race is.
I have it in me so much nearer home
To scare myself with my own desert places.

Statistics
Place: 18 out of 76
Avg (all users): 5.8116
Avg (commenters): 6.7500
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/18/2007 06:54:41 PM
The title is necessary for this to fit the challenge.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/18/2007 07:10:51 AM
Very nice image that uses shadows well to convey the end of the day. It feels like it wants to be a great picture (possibly a ribbon winner) but that somehow something doesnt quite work. Having thought about this I just wonder whether the chair makes the frame slightly cluttered and whether it would have been better without it.

Still a great shot
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/17/2007 04:34:29 PM
this has a very nice feel to it.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/14/2007 06:57:36 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background good,
Technical: Focus, Exposure: good,
Appeal:lovely soft colour, good focal point rather nostalgic
Total Averaged Rating 8.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/14/2007 04:19:08 AM
No feel of challenge.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/12/2007 05:52:07 PM
Nice lighting, creative idea.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/12/2007 04:26:21 PM
Beautiful lighting throughout this photograph. I love the highlights of the blinds on the curtain and how they are diffused on the dresser. Very strong shot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/12/2007 02:14:22 AM
fantastic lighting - very well composed and executed
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/11/2007 08:24:47 PM
Very, very beautiful in it's simplicty. Love the tones.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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