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01/07/2004 06:36:33 PM |
Greetings from the CC and happy new year. I think you did a good job of the poster part of this shot, the caption and border are visible yet not overbearing. I think the colour and lighting is also good, and tho generally i think a central compostion is a bit boring, i think for a poster type of shot it seems quite appropriate. I think the quote you chose provides the wow part of this image. Without it, i think,it might be a bit of a postcard.
The patriotic subject, is my only real critique of sorts. It has limited appeal, of course those with similar world views will appreciate it much more, however to the masses of people who see things differently your shot has little appeal IMO. Just something to consider. I would also like to be able to read the bottom of the monument. hope that gives you something to think about, and happy shooting! |
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01/03/2004 11:36:09 AM |
Excellent composition, powerful quote (author?) |
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01/02/2004 10:15:20 PM |
You may want to center the wreath, it makes a slight difference that there is not symmetry. But clear and picture that represents the motivation. |
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01/01/2004 05:02:18 AM |
Love the contrast in color - more subdued in sky and statue, pops the flag. Great capture, nicely framed, good selection of quote ( Pericles? ), nice font choice. |
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12/31/2003 06:55:41 AM |
surely this is motivational. it's too bad we cannot read the fine print on the statue.
strong idea. this is also good timing, people will take to this. |
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12/31/2003 04:15:55 AM |
I think this is a real commercial image (as far as I can judge....). You could sell it as a postcard in shops close to the monument. Perfect match between image and text. |
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12/29/2003 08:07:35 PM |
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12/29/2003 08:00:56 PM |
Very inspiring shot, you captued this and executed it very well, I like the border, perfect width and color for this poster, great job |
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12/29/2003 06:52:09 PM |
Very nice, really looks like a poster. photo is great. 9 |
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12/29/2003 04:47:32 PM |
Nice shot and graphic treatment. Well done! |
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12/29/2003 09:09:37 AM |
Awsome light. Too bad the central inscription on the statue isn't centered in the frame. Personally I would have cropped higher so that we would have seen the stones under the soldiers feet without including the brown base with the gold lettering. I think this who have helped center the image better. Nice work! |
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12/29/2003 04:47:08 AM |
Beautifully done ! I love the color mix and professional look of this. Good luck ! |
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12/29/2003 02:13:37 AM |
Perfect shot, perfectly wonderful sentiment. Good typography. |
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12/29/2003 12:04:29 AM |
Great classic shot and concept. |
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12/28/2003 07:44:21 PM |
Good use of a familiar symbol; good lighting, exposure, and color scheme. It's a little odd having the quotation on the monument readable, since it's different from your caption. In this one case, I might have considered blurring the type on the monument slightly. |
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