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01/03/2004 03:00:32 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Train...
This is a lovely flower... I think there are several opportunities to improve the shot though... The background/surface color doesn't provide any particularly strong contrast or support for the flower and its colors. The composition here seems a bit odd to me as well. It's a tight crop on the left and right. I would have considered cropping even tighter or including the whole flower rather than clipping the very tips of the petals.
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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12/28/2003 10:13:32 AM |
| I like this shot, but I think I would like to see all the petals, I wouldn't have cropped them. |
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12/28/2003 06:04:55 AM |
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12/27/2003 06:14:31 PM |
| Stunning. Beautiful subject nicely captured. Great detail in the middle with nicely soft petals. |
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12/27/2003 07:57:52 AM |
| Very pretty flower, detail, focus, and backlighting. Why the choice of this crop, though? |
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12/25/2003 06:02:55 PM |
| lighting is unusual, separates this from most flower macros |
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12/25/2003 07:54:40 AM |
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12/24/2003 03:52:30 AM |
| Love the soft backlight and the center colors. Maybe crop a bit closer ? |
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12/23/2003 11:59:20 PM |
| Beautifully done! Love the lighting and the wonderful color. 8 |
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12/23/2003 06:32:32 PM |
| NIce flowe shot is a sea of many flowers this challenge. Well done. I may have cropped is a little more in at the obttom to make it a bit more symetical, but the shadow at the bottom also works |
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12/23/2003 08:45:03 AM |
| This is so pretty. I wish the flower were floating (to avoid the shadows at the bottom. Nice tone and focus. |
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12/23/2003 05:29:18 AM |
Technical: fits the challenge. Exposure focus lighting all good, composition could be stronger.
Personal: I love the light from behind, and the colors are lovely. But I think a different composition could make this shot better- I'd prefer to see all the petals in full or for them all to be cropped evenly.
My vote: 6 |
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12/22/2003 11:39:09 AM |
| I like the composition. Very crisp. |
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12/22/2003 04:09:23 AM |
| Beautiful, I like the way you cut off the top which makes it look different. |
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12/21/2003 07:42:35 PM |
| I would have liked this better if the petals on the left and right were not cut off and given a bit of background around them |
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12/21/2003 07:18:43 PM |
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