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05/22/2007 10:16:59 AM |
| The flash is a photo killer. |
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05/21/2007 08:02:33 PM |
| Lighting seems a bit harsh... better off with bounce light or diffusion? |
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05/21/2007 03:22:09 PM |
| not sure the lighting fully compliments your shot |
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05/21/2007 11:57:46 AM |
| If you want your pictures on DPC rated higher i would recommend a white or black bacground for shots like this. The cream and whip fit well with the foreground, but the countertop and such are distractions. |
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05/20/2007 10:21:43 PM |
| Good concept, but the lighting is a bit strong and the cream container in the background draws your attention away from the subject. |
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05/19/2007 10:14:17 PM |
| Yum!! Chocolate... the epitome of silky smooth! (6) |
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05/18/2007 05:55:33 PM |
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05/18/2007 04:41:43 AM |
I think the flash probably ruined the atmosphere in this pic.
A shallower depth of field and better angle could have brought more out of the subject imo. |
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05/18/2007 01:08:52 AM |
| lighting is too harsh, composition not very appealing. |
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05/17/2007 11:13:57 AM |
| lots of potential here but the camera-mounted flash is unkind, gets too much glare off the pie plate in front (also oof) and an almost oily sheen to the chocolate. a closer crop would likely have worked better too, the whisk and double cream detract. Still very good idea, just get more dof and in closer. Lots of chocolate in this challenge, look at similar pics. good luck! :-) |
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05/17/2007 07:58:09 AM |
| this looks delicious, but it's a little blurry and the background is distracting.nice take on the challenge though! |
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05/17/2007 05:13:46 AM |
| harsh flash, busy background. |
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05/16/2007 05:48:58 PM |
| Never use your pop up flash, go to strobist.com and learn how to use off camera lighting, it would add so much to this pic |
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05/16/2007 03:05:42 PM |
| on camera flash produces harsh shadows and makes the image look flat. If you can use light from side, it would be better |
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05/16/2007 03:04:46 AM |
| this is a nice idea but looks like a rushed shot and is really let down by the background |
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