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02/22/2007 05:24:02 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, this is a very strong image. The subject is in the right third which gives a sense of stability and balance to the shot. It is framed by the two leafy parts, which gives it "boundaries" that differentiate the veggie from the rest of the shot as well. this helps to break up the shot into different parts and add interest.
Technically, the lighting is good, the exposure is good, and the focus is good. The shallow dof helps to emphasize the subject, and you have good detail which has not been lost in shadows or highlights. The viewer can almost "feel" the vegetable, just by looking at it.
While it is a technically well done photograph, it is not one that "moves" the voter or makes them linger for a bit longer. In looking at your bar graph, there were significantly more 5s than anything, and this tells me that most viewers looked at it like I would have -- a technically good shot that has little or no emotional appeal that the viewer can identify with.
Best to you in future challenges, and if I need to further explain or clarify anything, please feel free to contact me.
karmat |
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02/18/2007 05:34:42 PM |
Good lighting and beautiful colors. |
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02/18/2007 10:39:21 AM |
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02/18/2007 04:22:57 AM |
neat up close, good detail. |
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02/15/2007 02:35:59 PM |
I don't know if a lot of people will get this, but I think it's awesome. 8 |
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02/13/2007 02:08:33 PM |
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02/13/2007 05:20:37 AM |
Mathematician or Computer Scientist? :D Certainly an interesting vegetable shot. I like how you held back and didn't try to fill the frame with this as the surrounding environment adds context to the photo. Good luck in the challenge. |
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02/12/2007 04:25:08 PM |
Or was it Mandelbrot? Anyway, nice shot. 6
Jack |
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02/12/2007 07:11:15 AM |
what on earth is this? Sorry, I'm truly ignorant. :) |
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02/11/2007 07:23:50 PM |
stephen wolfram would agree :-) |
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