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11/27/2003 07:09:42 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I like the unreal feel to this. I'm guessing you created this effect by bumping up the contrast quite a bit. It really works for you. Also, you have done a great job controlling your depth of field - each word is crisp and in focus. Also, your composition - the placement of each individual word - is very nice. I wonder what it would have looked like if you had shot the words right-side-up instead of up-side-down. Finally, I don't think that shot under "aesthetic" hurt your image at all - I had to look pretty hard to even find that word, and find your mark. If you hadn't mentioned it, I never would have noticed it.
Good job!
Steve |
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11/23/2003 04:49:40 AM |
| very clever use of the magnets! |
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11/22/2003 07:43:28 PM |
| there should be a random "fuck" somewhere near the lower left corner.. then i would give you a 10 :) it would've caught me off guard. although, i notice you decided to include sex... not good enough :) well.. now that i look at it.. sex, cigarette, drunk, model, and hard in succession is a kinda neat. |
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11/22/2003 03:41:08 AM |
| Don't know that I've every heard that a picture is worth a thousand magnets ... but I like this none-the-less. I think it would have worked better if it were flipped upside down so people could read the words better. You've done a very good job of keeping the entire field in focus even though it is obviously not a flat field! |
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11/19/2003 05:30:41 PM |
| Interesting try here, itsjust falls short of being super and ultra creative. add a color or dimension to this some how. bring me off the 2d black and whitewith a twist- turn one word around...something... |
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11/18/2003 09:17:29 AM |
| great composition and clarity! The fact that every word is clear and readable is a big plus! |
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11/18/2003 05:03:36 AM |
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11/17/2003 11:45:39 AM |
| Did you deliberately set this up so that the words were difficult to read? If so, I think it was probably a good choice. It makes the veiwer look longer in order to make some sense of it. |
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11/17/2003 08:24:40 AM |
| great idea, and great lines. why did you submit it upside down? |
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11/17/2003 05:31:23 AM |
| Cool idea! I have these magnets as well :D I really like how you have them set up .. there is really something interesting about this photo, I like it. |
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11/17/2003 02:35:42 AM |
| Original idea. This tiling must have taken quite a bit of time to complete. I laso like the way you have positioned some of the words, such as in the lower righthand corner where you have placed "best" and "sex" together. Intentional? |
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11/16/2003 09:32:15 PM |
| This had to take alot of time and effort to set up I am sure, great concept very imaginative, and a good capture. |
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