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Challenge: Shallow DOF III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.4D
Location: Hayword, Wi
Date: Jan 30, 2007
Aperture: f3.0
ISO: 640
Shutter: 1/1000
Date Uploaded: Jan 30, 2007

Taken early morning in Hayword, Wi. Tried to capture the antlers contrasted with stark background.

Converted from raw, levels, curves, hue and sat a bit, resized, sharpened, and saved for web.

Statistics
Place: 187 out of 413
Avg (all users): 5.4324
Avg (commenters): 6.3333
Avg (participants): 5.1647
Avg (non-participants): 5.6600
Views since voting: 606
Views during voting: 259
Votes: 185
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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02/12/2007 09:55:19 AM
The technicals: Focus is sharp for the subject. DOF is clearly there. The lighting is quite flat and the composition, while nicely off-set, is not too dynamic. This is a shot I would quickly think about B&W because the colors do not add much to the picture. Personally, I like color which provides "pop" or adds meaning, or B&W. Drab, in-between colors generally let a picture down.

The feel: What is the purpose of the picture? What feeling are you trying to capture? I'm not sure I'm picking up much. If you wanted a sorta nostalgia feel, you could have considered sepia to help you out. Could you have removed that thing hanging from the one antler? It ruins the mood a bit too.

The game: Fits Shallow DOF well, but the picture does not stand on its own. The voters supported your clear shallow DOF and the framing, but did not reward you for content or "wow".
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/02/2007 06:31:52 PM
Good use of shallow DOF and diagonal lines. Also, both the foreground post and the antlers are quite sharp. However, I feel that the image needs more light on the in focus area, fill flash maybe.
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02/01/2007 07:40:17 PM
What is that hanging on the antlers?
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02/01/2007 08:14:57 AM
Great shot. I like the composition, good lines and good placement.
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