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11/03/2006 06:41:32 AM |
Hello from the Critique Club,
This image is definite proof that hitting a home run with the challenge topic can overcome technical flaws in the image. My firsts impression was that the image evokes a lot of emotion and has a nice feel of times gone by but the focus is not as sharp as it could be and the image appears a bit dark. However, I do believe that the focus issue can be minimized with some additional sharpening and the darkness issue is a matter or personal preference, so I never down score for that (unless it is so bad I can't see hardly any details).
You came up with an exceptional idea that could have been in the top ten easily with a little better execution. Nice job and nice image.
Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.
Tim
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10/29/2006 10:41:02 PM |
Wow...I was wrong in who I thought belonged to this photo. Congrats on your score. |
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10/29/2006 05:49:50 PM |
Very nice shot. I love the "old" feel to this shot. Great Image. |
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10/29/2006 08:39:02 AM |
I like the concept of this photo, but I would have liked to see a bit more of the rails. |
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10/29/2006 01:31:20 AM |
I think I know who belongs to this image!! Great!! |
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10/28/2006 06:21:11 PM |
Wow, its an emotional shot. I would have probably not cropped off the right-hand rail, and left the girl more on the left side of the shot instead, but I suppose it would have been a different shot then, with a different feeling. |
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10/27/2006 11:42:06 AM |
So cute - the focus is maybe not spot on, but I like it :o) Good luck |
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10/27/2006 07:09:45 AM |
Lacking that depth of field focus. Not the Bokeh, I like that, but the focus at the upper part of her body. I really like the composition, and I like the tones, mood, and the unique idea, hopefully it fairs well because I like it alot, but I could almost guarantee you would of earned a top 10 spot if the focus was just a smidgin more clear. GL. |
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10/27/2006 05:40:05 AM |
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10/24/2006 07:02:36 PM |
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10/24/2006 03:25:03 PM |
i wish the subject was a tiny bit sharper from the background.. but i still gave this an 8 |
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10/24/2006 03:25:50 AM |
My favorite shot of the challenge, says it all but with simplicity! Good luck 10 |
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10/23/2006 10:36:56 PM |
20% through and this is my first 10.
A great shot with a lot of emotion.
Good luck
Kev |
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10/23/2006 07:57:20 PM |
Super. I would like to see the child a little sharper. |
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10/23/2006 05:44:06 PM |
Fantastic shot. good luck. hope this ribbons. 10 |
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10/23/2006 04:42:07 PM |
Good shot. One of the best in the contest. Getting a kid to cooperate for these kinds of shots can be soooooo hard. I know! |
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10/23/2006 03:45:11 PM |
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10/23/2006 02:39:27 PM |
Really nice shot, the slight softness/blur gives a nice quality. |
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10/23/2006 01:21:31 PM |
This photo brings back memories for me... I used to spend a week each summer with my grandfather in South Carolina. One of the highlights of my week was walking along the railroad tracks that ran behind his home. Very nice work :) |
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10/23/2006 09:11:48 AM |
Aw, give me a break. This may be cute, but sure is tacky. Definitely not a believable set up. |
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10/23/2006 06:21:28 AM |
Nice idea indeed. A little on the dark side - even though I like the dark side of this image. 7. |
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10/23/2006 04:23:56 AM |
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10/23/2006 03:18:12 AM |
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10/23/2006 03:03:45 AM |
I love this...the focus point seems to be on her leg...wish it was on her head...bump 7 |
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10/22/2006 11:26:06 PM |
Very emotional photo,a no to let kids play on rail tracks...8 |
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10/22/2006 08:58:37 PM |
Very Nice!!! Great movement and subject. 10 |
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