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08/26/2006 05:55:20 AM |
| Greetings from the Critique Club. I have looked over your entry and I have a few comments. First let me say this is a fantastic setup and idea. I wish the image had been a touch sharper. I'd suggest stopping down the lens to maybe f8-f11 and going with a little longer exposure. I'm not sure how that would effect the flame it would depend on how long your exposure ended up. You could get more light on the face without blowing out the candle I think. Overall I think you did pretty good with the concept a few minor adjustments I think this could have scored a bit better. The framing is near perfect for the effect and the title fits well. |
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08/18/2006 02:31:03 PM |
| That candle really makes her lips shimmer. Good job. |
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08/17/2006 05:34:42 PM |
| Great lighting on the face |
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08/17/2006 09:54:12 AM |
| It does evoke that feeling |
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08/15/2006 03:56:24 AM |
| nice idea. theres some sensor dust or dirt that could use removing though. |
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08/14/2006 05:33:35 PM |
| I would like to see a bit of color correction to make things less orange and would like more detail and texture in the model's lips. |
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08/14/2006 04:41:12 PM |
| Slightly out of focus, but still gives it somewhat of a warming effect. 7. |
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08/14/2006 02:07:12 PM |
Nice. The flame is blown out (No pun intended) and I think just not enough WOW. It is a nice shot. 6
Wazz |
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