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03/02/2013 05:06:35 PM |
HAhahahaha at your title! And the image is so wonderful for the topic, Enzo!
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07/30/2006 11:34:11 AM |
---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
First impression - awesome shot but not really an abstract
IMO, being able to recognize this as a kiwi fruit right off tells be this is not an abstract. I know not all DPC share that opinion and the overall voting reflects that.
From a photographic standpoint, this image has a lot going for it. The composition is particularly well done. The eye travels down the spoon to the spread of seeds in the fruit then around the green letting the view take in the whole image.
I feel a real chill to the spoon and the fruit making the image even more intriguing. The line of focus in the lower left corner looks a little like it was selected and blurred in post processing. Hard to tell from your notes. If this is the case, I would recommend a smoother transition (more feathering) between the 2 fields.
The border is too wide as well. It takes attention away from the strong image.
Congratulations on your ribbon and execution of an exceptional macro!
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
David
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07/29/2006 08:16:05 PM |
| Enzo, here you have outdone yourself! Congratulations on your Yellow. |
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07/28/2006 07:31:47 PM |
| Excellent detail and capture. Congratulations! |
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07/28/2006 03:39:19 PM |
| Congrats dude, really dig the DOF in this one. Now go out there and get yourself a blue one mate, enough of the red and yellow one´s already :) |
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07/28/2006 03:25:28 PM |
| Initially seeing this in the thumbnail it's hard to see how it meets the challenge. But on viewing the full size image the shot's abstract qualities do become apparent. The focus and lighting are spot on. While perhaps not my favourite in the challenge, this is, in my opinion, the best of the three ribbon winners by quite a ways. Congratulations on a great effort. |
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07/28/2006 12:27:41 PM |
| congrats on 3rd!! great macro :) |
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07/28/2006 09:20:31 AM |
| this is amazing. GREAT job :) |
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07/26/2006 02:42:37 PM |
| Congratulations Enzo, you've got the yellow ribbon. Excellent shot! |
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07/26/2006 01:54:45 PM |
| Shame about No 1 but nice that you got a ribbon. This was one of my faves of the challenge |
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07/26/2006 01:38:45 PM |
| hey well done with this fantastic photo. Glad you ribboned! |
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07/26/2006 01:14:40 PM |
Congratulations on a fine image
and your Ribbon
This is a nice way to present the Kiwi friut |
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07/26/2006 06:43:47 AM |
well done Enzo
makes my mouth water
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07/26/2006 06:31:32 AM |
| Congrats, my friend! Kiwis make for such lovely subject matter!!! |
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07/26/2006 02:12:23 AM |
| Congrats on your ribbon, it was very well deserved. Lovely macro. |
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07/25/2006 10:39:50 PM |
| Love the composition, well done!!! |
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07/25/2006 06:58:53 PM |
| Congrats on a ribbon on such a well executed shot. Your lighting is outstanding. |
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07/25/2006 06:36:21 PM |
| Now that this has placed 3rd I feel this is a much better photograph! :P Congrats. |
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07/25/2006 06:28:33 PM |
| Hey congrats on your ribbon :) Well done. I love how vibrant this shot is.. and the tight crop is beautiful :) |
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07/25/2006 02:14:39 PM |
| I just noticed this! Congratulations on your 3rd place! |
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07/25/2006 01:39:25 PM |
| Well done Enzo another ribbon, way to go. |
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07/25/2006 01:30:26 PM |
| Congrats on your ribbon, excellent shot! |
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07/25/2006 12:36:39 PM |
wow... terrificly good !!!
congrats on ribbon !! |
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07/25/2006 11:38:09 AM |
| Very...very cool image. Congrats on your ribbon. |
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07/25/2006 11:25:43 AM |
I love your title!!!!
Actually, your title was the reason I wanted to enjoy your photo. Please, feel free to enjoy the titles on my portfolio. (To date I believe that I have created more great titles than photos, but that only makes me more determined to improve my photography.)
I'm starting to believe that I may be more writer than photographer. Albeit, I love both passionately! |
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07/25/2006 10:40:51 AM |
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07/25/2006 10:19:07 AM |
Originally posted by Rikki:
My pick for a ribbon in this challenge. The focus is sharp and the eye is directed to your subject without question. The slight OOF areas by the base of the spoon might be a distraction but this is quite yummy as an image. Great job and goodluck in this challenge ;) |
Enzo. I guess my prediction came true then ;) |
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07/25/2006 10:16:56 AM |
| wow, i am surprised at the amount of 5s and 6s this photo got. and there is no way it deserves the 2 or the 3's definately deserves the ribbon, congrats. |
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07/25/2006 09:58:02 AM |
| Very fresh and nice !! But but but... what about the border ? have you sharpened your picture AFTER having added your border ?? If so, it's the reason why there's an irregular whiter line at the transition between the black border and the green kiwi... but I've to shut up a bit, congrats for the ribbon, what about a blue next time ??? ;) |
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07/25/2006 09:50:51 AM |
| Hey congrats! I gave this shot a 9 and thought it was for sure the winner. I am glad to see it get a ribbon! |
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07/24/2006 05:25:50 PM |
| You know, I have never liked Kiwi fruit. But this almost makes it look good to me. Love that razor sharp dof. |
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07/24/2006 05:24:38 PM |
Great Picture, only missed the ribbon by one.
Well done |
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07/24/2006 11:35:20 AM |
| I gave this a 9. Good macro. Colors are very good. Framing is well done, but borders on sacrificing the 'image space', at this size, if that makes sense, but still looks good, in my opinion. Good texture and composition. |
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07/24/2006 07:39:58 AM |
| beautiful, the DOF really adds to the abstract part, cute title, congrats on barely missing a ribbon (damn, if it weren't for Rikki, eh?)... awesome shot! |
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07/24/2006 04:44:34 AM |
Way to go!!! This is awesome! My pick for a top 3 spot. . .but 4th is great too!! Congratulations.
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07/24/2006 04:06:15 AM |
congrats on your RIBBON! A beautiful image indeed!
Message edited by author 2006-07-26 10:07:42. |
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07/24/2006 02:59:53 AM |
| Another great finish and a great picture! Congratulations! |
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07/24/2006 02:51:37 AM |
| great image! Congrats on 4th. |
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07/24/2006 01:13:34 AM |
| ooh this is nice, i'm hungry now. congrats!! |
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07/24/2006 12:32:57 AM |
Sooo close!! Congrats on almost a ribbon :)
by the way im back in melbourne, is so cooooold!!! |
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07/23/2006 08:40:22 PM |
| Fantastic image. Congratulation on your excellent 4th place. You were up against some stunning competition in this challenge. |
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07/23/2006 08:25:49 PM |
| Aw, so close pasta! I gave this a 10, one of only 2 in the challenge. Great shot! |
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07/23/2006 08:24:28 PM |
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07/23/2006 08:24:21 PM |
| Enzo ;) Another front page my friend. Congrats on Top 5 ;) |
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07/23/2006 03:43:42 PM |
| Fun word play on thte title. Very nicely composed image. Wouldn't mind a little more DOF though. Still, great shot! good luck :) |
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07/23/2006 05:54:26 AM |
| one of my favorites this challenge -- the spoon adds the right element (a bit of color/texture change) and the narrow dof was carefully placed |
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07/22/2006 09:47:30 AM |
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07/21/2006 05:38:30 PM |
| Wonderful image. Love the colors. |
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07/21/2006 05:32:38 PM |
| My pick for a ribbon in this challenge. The focus is sharp and the eye is directed to your subject without question. The slight OOF areas by the base of the spoon might be a distraction but this is quite yummy as an image. Great job and goodluck in this challenge ;) |
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07/21/2006 05:08:00 PM |
| Not much of an abstract but aniec shot none theless. I didnt let that affect my vote. Good colors and lighting but the area in focus is just a bit too thin IMO. |
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07/21/2006 07:08:51 AM |
| Bumping up on my second run through - while not truly abstract, the detail and effect are extremely good. |
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07/20/2006 01:11:02 PM |
| Bumping to a 10. Very well done. |
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07/20/2006 01:02:46 PM |
| Like a ray of sunshine, neat. |
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07/19/2006 06:29:19 PM |
| border is a little on the heavy side for my tastes |
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07/19/2006 08:09:49 AM |
| looking through this whole selection has made me hungry but this is definatly my fav |
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07/18/2006 09:48:17 PM |
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07/18/2006 04:20:37 PM |
Abstract as I perceive abstract? Perhaps more of a macro than an abstract.
Do I like it? Yep. Nicely composed and an excellent macro. Lighting is good as well. |
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07/18/2006 03:51:50 PM |
| very nice. i really enjoy the colors and the composition. great job! |
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07/18/2006 01:01:56 PM |
| I know this is an abstract challenge, but I'm continually being amazed by the quality of macros. This is another great one with lots of detail. Well done! |
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07/18/2006 08:14:11 AM |
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07/18/2006 06:40:00 AM |
| 9 :) really nice composition. great idea and photo. |
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07/17/2006 06:39:07 PM |
| Stunning visual clarity and composition. This is wonderful! |
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07/17/2006 02:53:22 PM |
| great attention to detail. the orange highlight on the fork is a nice touch. |
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07/17/2006 11:31:41 AM |
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07/17/2006 08:38:00 AM |
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07/17/2006 08:15:46 AM |
| Wow What a great shot hope to see this in the top 3 |
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07/17/2006 07:36:14 AM |
| I HATE your border with passion. But stunning picture |
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07/17/2006 06:04:29 AM |
| Nice. Great lighting and DOF. 10 |
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07/17/2006 12:19:06 AM |
| Very good. Good luck with this in the challenge. |
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07/16/2006 08:16:51 PM |
| Nice shot, I would've much preferred to see the whole kiwi in focus, 9 |
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