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burying the past
burying the past
dragonlady


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Challenge: Progress (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Garden City village
Date: Jul 9, 2006
Aperture: f16
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/320 sec
Date Uploaded: Jul 10, 2006

A historic stone church actually being restored and converted into an office building; the pile of rubble and ominous sky gave it an interesting look (to me, anyway)...so I climbed a nearby hill and started taking pictures; this was my favorite...levels, curves, desaturate, hue/saturation, brightness/contrast,usm, cropped.

Statistics
Place: 62 out of 152
Avg (all users): 5.5660
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.2712
Avg (non-participants): 5.6505
Views since voting: 596
Views during voting: 342
Votes: 265
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/16/2006 08:15:33 AM
Technical: Focus - 1
Exposure - 1
Quality - 1
Aesthetic: Comp. - 0
Light - 1
Color - 1
Wow factor: 0
Personal tilt: 1/3

What I liked: Creative thought.

What might improve the image, IMO: The composition of the image may benefit from being less centered as far as the horizon of the image is concerned

NOTE: I'm trying this system of giving comments on all images I vote on, my score of the photo, and what I did and did not like. Please, I'd like feedback on whether or not this is helpful, so feel free to give me a PM with any feedback - positive and negative are welcome. Also, my profile has more about what all of the terms in my grading system mean to me.
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07/15/2006 12:47:09 PM
I love 'the past' and don't consider that burying it is by any means a form of progress. However, I like your photo and it caught my eye.
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07/14/2006 07:21:04 PM
A little weak in the challenge tie-in, but an interesting shot.
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07/13/2006 08:22:10 AM
Nice artistic photo. I like the deep contrast...gives it dramatism.
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07/13/2006 06:02:30 AM
Nice shot and concept, but the lack of contrast between the rubble pile and the church sort of takes away from the effect.
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07/12/2006 11:30:03 PM
Oh nice one.
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07/12/2006 01:21:58 PM
great shot
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07/11/2006 09:01:51 PM
The pile of rubble obscures the church a bit much I think. I realise this may have been your point but I feel it hides too much of the church
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