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07/22/2006 04:59:41 AM |
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07/20/2006 11:18:41 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Ingibergur,
Firstly, congratulations on a well deserved top 20 finish. I have looked at your portfolio and you have some excellent work there.
You scored very well in this challenge but interestingly did not get a huge number of comments. DrAchoo has posted some useful feedback in that the sky and weed are the 'weak' areas of the photo. It also seems to be a little oversharpened IMO.
The conversion to black and white was a good choice for this subject and the evocative image works well and tells a story. Interesting that Pano points out that this would have worked for the perspective challenge. I see that you did enter something similar for that (so congratulations on capitialising on the location) I actually like your perspective entry a little more than this one, perhaps because of your excellent application of toning which adds a little to the shot.
Overall this is a great shot. Nicely seen and executed with only small potential areas for improvement. Excellent work, I look forward to seeing more of your photos in the future.
Regards Chris
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07/17/2006 07:13:07 PM |
| This one got my high vote. Very well presented. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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07/16/2006 08:39:13 PM |
| You did it... This one scored higher than your last entry... both are good though IMHO... Töff mynd.. |
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07/15/2006 06:20:11 PM |
| Nice work, great perspective. I like the choice of black and white. |
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07/14/2006 07:37:00 PM |
| I like the composition here. A bit too sharp in my opinion. The foreground grass looks a bit washed out too |
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07/12/2006 08:49:23 PM |
| Works well in B&W. nice compa and leading lines , not to mention the emotive subject. Nice Job. |
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07/12/2006 01:15:00 PM |
| Nice...like the contrast...like the diagonal leading across the image...7 |
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07/11/2006 10:26:31 AM |
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07/10/2006 11:58:01 AM |
| Suited by B&W...good texture. |
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07/10/2006 11:26:59 AM |
| On the first 15 pictures I see, I'm looking for a full 30 seconds and leaving a comment...I like the composition. Small things to change: the blown sky and the weedy thing at center bottom (my eye keeps being drawn to it). The B&W conversion is nice. The pic tells a story as well (always good).6 |
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07/10/2006 10:44:07 AM |
| this on would have also fitted the perspective challenge |
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07/10/2006 02:38:08 AM |
| great as a b and w, well done |
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