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06/01/2006 02:44:59 PM |
*Critique Club*
First impressions, compositions is great. I like the tight crop. Focus is spot on where I think it needs to be. My attention immediately goes to your eyes. Which has a look of determination. I like the DOF which is making your chest blurry. I really like the fade to all black behind you. Job well done. The two things that I say would improve your photo is to try and avoid the hot spots on the sword and on your forehead. Really nice photo though. |
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05/25/2006 05:16:14 PM |
Good light, good eyes, good pose.... Good picture. |
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05/25/2006 04:24:14 PM |
I think this was a bitoverdone in NI. Great lighting though ;) |
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05/21/2006 04:27:47 PM |
good lighting, very dramatic. little harsh on the hot spot on your nose and on the high;ights in the blade. |
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05/21/2006 02:59:55 PM |
This is a neat idea, but there's too much reflection in the blade, another hot spot on your nose, and way too much Neat Image. You look like you're made of wax. |
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05/20/2006 11:22:24 PM |
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05/20/2006 06:44:44 PM |
Good lighting, but for me, too much selective blur. Otherwise, this is good. |
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05/20/2006 06:48:18 AM |
This is a strong self portrait. Nicely done. |
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05/19/2006 08:41:35 PM |
Beautiful! The lighting makes this absolutely stunning. |
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05/19/2006 06:41:51 PM |
It's like a classic theatrical portrait. You're not a bollywood actor, are you? ;-) |
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05/19/2006 09:32:12 AM |
What a meaningful look you have in your eyes...very gladiator-esque. |
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05/19/2006 09:24:33 AM |
Not a big fan of the inappropriate use of the Katana. As someone who studies Iaido, this is very disrespectful. I do like the photo on technical merits.
By the way you would never draw a sword in that manner. If you did, you could potentially cut your own neck or nose right off. Always turn the saya with your left hand so the blade draws towards the attacker not yourself. |
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05/19/2006 02:59:19 AM |
Great lighting and composition, the diagonal of hte sword works well. |
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