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08/17/2003 11:43:49 AM |
| Would be better off center and maybe at an angle. |
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08/17/2003 12:01:37 AM |
Interesting subject, but perhaps a much tighter crop on the subject to get rid of the messy and distracting greenery on the left, bottom and right sides.
However, well done. Good try =) |
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08/16/2003 08:32:05 PM |
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08/16/2003 08:28:26 PM |
| What a great picture! I like the way that the roof collapsed in that one place...it makes the picture!! |
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08/14/2003 11:24:21 AM |
What a perfect subject for this challenge and I like your choice of black and white. I am not sure the straight on viewpoint and centred composition are the strongest choices and it might be nice to have some cloud detail to the sky but those are minor suggestions. A really strong fit to challenge theme.
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08/14/2003 09:25:44 AM |
| Would this work better if the collapsed roof would have been more in the outer third of the picture. The sky also cuts the picture in half. It might have been better to have more ground and less sky. These are just some thought to think about. I like the lightiing and feeling of this photo. |
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08/14/2003 08:55:29 AM |
| picture comes off a little flat. nothing to give it dimension |
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08/14/2003 06:24:38 AM |
| Lucky find, kinda looks funny in a way. Did this house have two chimneys? |
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08/14/2003 06:02:51 AM |
| certainly meets the challenge...a personal response is that I wish this had been a little less centered - would a little bit of cropping help? |
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08/13/2003 11:49:49 PM |
| May be is not the best perspective, but makes the challenge pretty well |
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08/13/2003 07:56:52 PM |
| Abandoned buildings do not desolation make. A level camera would have earned an extra point |
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08/13/2003 02:50:32 AM |
| Usually I turn aside centered subjects but this one works well for me. |
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08/12/2003 09:12:09 PM |
| I like this, but it's a little too centered. Also, I think the lighting is too bright for the subject matter - a darker look and/or more contrast would make this more dramatic. |
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