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05/13/2006 11:46:09 AM |
Greetings from the CC
Hmm... well o n the plus side I like your subject, I like that her eyes really stand out and the splash of pink color on her skirt. You have also done a very good job getting a blurred effect/ DOF
I think you did poorly cause this is more of a portrait than PJ.
I am not sure that this compostion really works for me either. It is sort of different and creative, but I find myself wanting to turn my head to even her out. I think I would of liked it more if she were completely upside down vs. slanted. Or perhaps cropping a little bit tighter especially on the top and left about 1/2 inch.
Just some ideas. |
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05/07/2006 03:28:59 PM |
| Great shot for the challenge |
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05/07/2006 02:33:52 PM |
| Nice portrait and I gave it a good score, but has little to do with Photo Journalism IMO. |
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05/03/2006 03:25:17 AM |
| nice. except the right chin part over exposed ... overall great photo |
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05/01/2006 03:13:41 PM |
| A nice aspect, cool subject, overall nice shot... but isn't a particularly strong shot for a photojournalism challenge. |
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05/01/2006 12:11:55 PM |
| Fashion and make up just don't fit into the genre. |
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05/01/2006 07:08:04 AM |
| Cute indeed! Interesting composition, different for sure, I like it though. ANd your model has pretty dreamy eyes :) |
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05/01/2006 04:52:04 AM |
| This is more fashion than photojournalism, but she is quite lovely and the DOF is good. Her eyes are mesmerizing. |
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05/01/2006 04:36:44 AM |
| Not seeing any connection to the challenge. DOF is too shallow |
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05/01/2006 02:55:24 AM |
| odd angle & slightly over exposed, great eyes though |
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