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05/02/2006 11:12:31 PM |
:: Critique Club ::
I like the photoâ€Â¦would like it more if his shirt didn’t have writing on it. As for meeting the challenge I don’t think it doesâ€Â¦the window is more the background than the frame. Like I said for a normal photo it not all that badâ€Â¦if you can deal with the noise which I really don’t mind that much. I think your low score definitely suffered from the window not framing your subject.
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04/30/2006 07:33:31 PM |
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04/30/2006 06:14:04 PM |
| Sorry but way too noisy for my taste, also the composition is a bit off, you cut off his toes but still have room behind him and above him. |
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04/30/2006 03:29:51 PM |
| Frame the subject of your photograph using the window (as in from a building). Don't see him framed here. |
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04/30/2006 12:51:31 PM |
| the nosie here adds a film grain quolity that most digitlers don't use cause they don't...lol (i could get mean but i won't) anyhow i like the affect and i like the old look of film and the set of this shot it all blends nicly and it all has a nice light quolity to it too. well done and GL |
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04/29/2006 08:21:06 PM |
| The sun is a little too bright. It kinda blurs out the black detail of the window. |
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04/29/2006 08:15:28 PM |
| I think this would be better if it were cropped lower, just above his head... not fond of the feet cropped off, disturbs the flow... |
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04/29/2006 03:22:39 PM |
| nice window framing but I think it might have been less distracting if the light in the windows were not so bright |
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04/29/2006 11:35:43 AM |
| Different take on "framed by the window". You did a good job of keeping the lighting set for the person rather than the bright background. |
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04/29/2006 08:52:03 AM |
| While not a bad idea, I thnk this one is more window-lit than window framed. I like his expression and the grainy feel to the image. I'd like to see the rest of that left foot, as chopping it off leads the viewer's eyes right out of the frame. |
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04/29/2006 06:35:56 AM |
| Using a noise filter would help this out, but be careful not to use too much. |
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04/29/2006 04:36:21 AM |
| noise, noise and more noise. |
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04/25/2006 05:02:11 PM |
| Including what is outside the window would have made this score much higher, IMO. As is your window is framing blown highlights, which isn't good for this particular challenge. If you couldn't spot meter the window area, getting the exposure from a gray card would have helped or finding that 18% gray equivalent on the subject, which would have been around his legs (not in the brightest spots). |
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04/25/2006 03:58:42 PM |
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04/25/2006 07:27:23 AM |
| I like this photo a lot and you have managed to get great lighting on the man reading the book. Like this a lot. |
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