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Challenge: Abstract Macro (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon
Location: Columbus, GA
Date: Mar 22, 2006
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Mar 26, 2006

The Teeth of a sprocket and chain

Statistics
Place: 62 out of 422
Avg (all users): 5.8200
Avg (commenters): 6.6250
Avg (participants): 5.7257
Avg (non-participants): 5.9425
Views since voting: 1169
Views during voting: 276
Votes: 200
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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04/04/2006 10:04:25 PM
Hey Scott :-) Well, I'll try to give you some thoughts here to mull over. Although, looking at your ratings, it's almost like looking in a mirror at my own! , so maybe not the wisest thing to do to listen to any of my advice :-P

Your shot displays a firm grasp on the technical fundamentals to ensure it does not garner a 'low' score. Good lighting, nice control over dof, crisp and clear where it needs to be and composed and all that in a manner to get the point across. The point of view has some interest, but I think it not strong enough to really grab and hold the viewer's attention for very long. Partly, I think it was the challenge topic, Abstract Macro. I think the shot fits well enough, but, being abstract macro, perhaps the voters were looking for more of the abstract side, bright vivid colors, use of repitition of lines and patterns and such.

This is something I often find when I'm looking at photos-when it first opens, if it at least grabs my attention, it must be at least a pretty competent shot. But then, if I find it holding my attention, without even realizing it, I think the longer it keeps me engaged viewing it, my 'score' meter steadily rises with the time spent :-) There are of course exceptions, sometimes a shot opens, and you know immediately it is a 10, but we can't all be j.j. beguins :-P

Looking at your profile, you've got some good solid shots there. Some good scorers. Just keep working at your craft, keep studying, keep seeking that ever elusive 'wow' factor. Something I often have to remind myself of, this place we call home (dpc) is a tough crowd, lots of totally incredible talent here. And growing all the time. It's a pretty solid field of photographs that we compete against every week. When we occasionally pop that 6+ shot, it feels good and to me, at least, holds a lot of weight. I sometimes go look at stuff out in the 'real world', stuff that is liked, well received, makes money hehehe, and think man, that would be right in mediocreville, probably, on the site! :-)

Well, I've rambled enough. Hope maybe this at least gives you a little bit of help.

taterbug
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/04/2006 06:51:34 PM
I predict a top 10 placement, Good luck!
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04/04/2006 09:58:16 AM
Great use of shallow DOF, nice texture and interesting color in the background. Cool looking photo!
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03/31/2006 04:39:00 PM
I like your choice of focus.
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03/30/2006 06:42:09 PM
good macro work done here.
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03/30/2006 05:42:14 AM
Looks like some of the clockworks I have encountered. Good eye for the abstract. Sharp where it needs to be. Nice work.
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03/29/2006 09:52:51 PM
Great idea, but maybe the depth of field is a little too narrow.
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03/29/2006 11:59:05 AM
Interesting.
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03/29/2006 01:24:16 AM
I like this.....
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