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03/15/2006 01:48:23 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Nice texture and lighting. Very well exposed.
Composition:
Composition isn't this photos strongest point. The choice of crop feels a bit crowded for my tastes.
Subject:
Discussing subject is sorta pointless for this photo as the texture and shapes of the "columns" are more the subject than the colums themselves I feel. That said, you did well at emphasizing the shape and texture.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: natural and well balanced.
Focus, sharp as a tack as far as I can tell.
Light, excellent.
To grow its vote?:
Tough challenge, but I feel the crowded composition may have hurt you some. And for many this photo probably didn't provide much "wow". DPC voters love some sort of wow factor.
Summary:
Very nice light study. I really like your choice of angle to capture the lighting.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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03/13/2006 05:22:05 AM |
| Cool shot. Excellent lighting and great eye. I love photographing things like this. |
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03/13/2006 02:55:59 AM |
| very interesting lines and light |
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03/10/2006 10:41:52 PM |
| Great image, nice lighting, a real play on the eyes. |
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03/10/2006 07:21:48 AM |
| very nice. subtle and elegant. |
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03/09/2006 11:32:13 AM |
| This is the most beaituful image I have seen in weeks - What an amazing eye you have... stunning! |
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03/08/2006 11:42:50 AM |
| interesting shapes and lighting |
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03/07/2006 04:26:26 PM |
| Works well in square crop; nice study. |
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03/07/2006 11:15:28 AM |
| Almost looks like a line of pregnant women. Very graceful curves. I like the pattern and DOF. Nice the way the light plays here making the highlights and shadows bring out the curves. |
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03/07/2006 04:53:20 AM |
| good use of pattern and natuarl light. |
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03/06/2006 05:33:14 PM |
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03/06/2006 11:57:20 AM |
| Great use of repeating pattern and the light filtering through is super cool. Excellent photo! |
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03/06/2006 01:00:47 AM |
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03/05/2006 08:00:49 PM |
| Gorgeous quasi-abstract! What a great image, and composition and exposure are perfect! |
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