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03/14/2006 02:38:56 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Aesthetic: Very nice and pleasing photo. Good mix of colors.
Technical: The hand is burnt out and the 'painter' is slightly out of focus.
Challenge: Oh yes- it does fit the challenge :)
Conclusion: Overall a nice composition which could have been even better if it was not 'overdone'. The perfect black, or dark, background would have been better (there is some light color visible behind painter). IMO, tighter crop with the painter more in frame (by being placed closer to painting) would have also been nice.
There are some real nice pictures in your profile. Looking forward to more submissions from you and good-luck for future submissions! 6.x is good score for this one.
I'm by no means expert in area of photography. My comments are purely based on my limited understanding of technology and art behind digital photography. Apart from doing detailed evaluation of your submission, my intent is to learn different styles of photography by critically evaluating selective submissions. If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via email or PM.
Wish you a great day!
-Tej |
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03/07/2006 06:36:14 PM |
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03/07/2006 06:47:01 AM |
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03/05/2006 01:05:59 PM |
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03/05/2006 10:46:50 AM |
| Cool, Need one of these at home. |
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03/04/2006 05:41:53 AM |
| Nice work done here. I like the concept. |
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03/03/2006 03:17:25 PM |
| I hope you didn't paint your wall this way just for the challenge ;) |
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03/03/2006 11:35:50 AM |
| Good to see someone really using light painting, in the classic sense of the term! |
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03/02/2006 08:01:50 PM |
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03/02/2006 05:01:12 PM |
| Hehe ... well done. It's nice to have someone really work on the challenge literally ... it really works well even though it could not have been anywhere near as easy as it looks |
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03/02/2006 05:18:33 AM |
| Very well composed. the colors are very vibrant |
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03/02/2006 01:03:41 AM |
| Hefði haft lit á rúllunni lÃka, höndin er heldur björt. |
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03/01/2006 09:06:24 PM |
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03/01/2006 12:08:35 PM |
I thought there would be photos in the challenge to remind us of Fantasia 
This one is done quite well, though there are some elements that don't come together (it's very clear that the roller is not touching the wall. The light trail isn't visible enough, and the painter's hand is illuminated bright than it really should be. Very good though. 7 |
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03/01/2006 10:11:32 AM |
| Excellent color and concept - how was it done? |
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03/01/2006 03:25:09 AM |
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03/01/2006 12:58:12 AM |
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02/28/2006 08:37:07 PM |
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02/28/2006 07:48:59 PM |
| great imagination. nice job. |
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02/28/2006 07:14:28 PM |
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