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12/06/2005 04:14:22 PM |
it seems like there are quite a few interesting pieces in your collection. i wonder how they could have been arranged to bring greater visual interest to the photo? |
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12/06/2005 09:54:27 AM |
the background is a bit distracting and there is no main focus to this image, next time try shooting from a differnt angel or have a tighter frame |
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12/06/2005 07:59:25 AM |
Ok, this is what I see.
Great color, blacks and whites good, crisp, however....
Staged, uninteresting concept, lighting flat, curtan distracting, dof needs work, crop needs work, overall not very interesting.
With all this subject matter, you could of created a story, but instead I see an Ebay sale. |
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12/06/2005 02:05:08 AM |
FMA!
Needs more GITS though. |
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12/04/2005 06:29:51 PM |
Nice collection. This pic could have had a lot more potential if you shot it in front of a solid background, like just the wall. The dolls are so colorful l that the soild backdrop and tighter crop could have helped a lot, making it less like a snap shot. |
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12/03/2005 09:51:01 PM |
You have a nice collection, but the presentation and lighting needs some work. I'd straighten the curtain in the background and try and take the picture with available light, not a flash. |
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12/03/2005 04:45:57 PM |
A great collection and well laid out. Bumping up. |
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12/01/2005 02:17:06 AM |
The light curtain in the background is quite distracting. It seems that you used a flash which has produced hotspots on some of the figures and dark shadows on the wall behind. A softer light would have been better. |
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11/30/2005 05:53:04 PM |
shame about the background with the curtain folds |
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11/30/2005 01:19:29 AM |
3 - Criticism; there was/is the potential to be much more creative here in my opinion. The lighting, focal points, angle, background, etc - even 'staging' the characters here, could have made this much more 'interesting' and added a bit of 'depth'. |
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