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12/04/2005 06:53:14 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Well, this is an odd entry to critique. It's very difficult to share some thoughts with you as you've not made any comments about what you were trying to achieve and what your toughts on the outcome are.
First Impression - the most important one:
An out of focus, indistinct snapshot that isn't close to the challenge brief.
Subject:
I can't see how this meets the Even challenge at all and the title just makes it worse, it doesn't make sense.
Technical (Colour and light):
The lighting is careless because you can see the overexposed window. The focus is terrible.
To get a Ribbon?:
Re-shoot it. Use a light source that's not visible, focus it, make it relevant to the challenge and give it a title that can be understood - although it should say 'even' without its title.
Summary:
I can't believe this image made a 4.9. It's only worth 2-3 at the most. The fact that it scored more just adds to its sleaze value.
Brett
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11/29/2005 10:34:59 AM |
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11/29/2005 02:05:00 AM |
| soft blue tone help this portrait |
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11/28/2005 04:22:59 PM |
| very good pic i like the use of light in this one with the shodowing |
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11/28/2005 05:52:48 AM |
| it amazes me the way a boobie shot is entered in every challange... the next challange... feet... oops look at that theres a boob. its getting old.. and boring. |
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11/27/2005 04:11:34 PM |
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11/27/2005 04:15:38 AM |
| I see two and that is even!!, well done |
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11/26/2005 03:14:39 PM |
| Beautiful. A lovely depiction of something even. A gorgeous model as well. |
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11/26/2005 09:01:40 AM |
| Unless this is a guy, I don't see anything odd. I do like the pose, and the lighting, both are sensuous. |
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11/25/2005 12:37:20 AM |
| I like the softness of this picture. Pretty model; nice pose. |
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11/25/2005 12:11:30 AM |
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11/23/2005 05:04:33 PM |
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11/23/2005 11:45:33 AM |
| lighting and composition not flattering. What's with that exposure-blown curtain? |
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11/23/2005 01:47:18 AM |
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11/22/2005 10:20:38 PM |
| Hot nude babe, great photography and beautiful lighting always get a 10 from me. |
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11/22/2005 09:09:15 PM |
| hmmmmmmmmmmm. All I have to say. |
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