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06/17/2003 10:17:39 AM |
*Critique Club*
Focus does seem a bit soft on the glass, the noise maker, and the confetti. It's really hard to tell how it is on the bubbles cause of their textures.
The angle and framing/cropping are really good. I like how you have included the noise maker, and the confetti, while dark, do add a bit of interest to the shot.
You got a bright blue pixel to the right of the glass. I'm gonna have to mark you down 4 points for that. lol (just a joke if you follow the forums) Not a big deal.
The lighting on the left of the large part of the glass is a bit harsh. I do however like it on the bubbles. I like the little rainbows in the bubbles.
I would definately like to see sharper focus.
~Heather~ |
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06/10/2003 02:46:50 PM |
| This is very well done and fun to study. Nice composition, textures, and colors. |
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06/10/2003 02:04:49 AM |
| Very good idea. I like your set up. |
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06/09/2003 08:15:14 AM |
| A creative way to present bubbles. Nice touches of the horn and the confetti. Wish things were a bit sharper. |
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06/08/2003 06:52:39 PM |
| nice job..i like how you added the confetti and the other thing on the right.. |
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06/08/2003 10:30:02 AM |
| Wonderful shot! The lighting is a bit harsh and direct, but otherwise what a great superb shot. A wonderful idea and composition - 9 despite the lighting. |
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06/08/2003 02:45:44 AM |
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06/07/2003 05:02:57 PM |
| This could be really good, but it is out of focus. |
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06/06/2003 12:27:18 PM |
| I like the composition of this one a lot! The noisemaker looks a bit out of focus to me, but the overall look is very nice and polished. |
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06/05/2003 07:27:35 AM |
| that's cute...and you won't have a hang over :o) |
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06/05/2003 07:09:10 AM |
| Nice idea, well lit. I like the colours at the bottom. A shame you couldn't get more rainbow colours refracted in the bubbles. Good use of contrast between the light glass and dark background. 9 |
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06/04/2003 07:58:50 PM |
| Dish soap suds does not a liquid shot make. Neat idea, but this photo doesn't really appeal to me. Not sure why, but maybe its the lighting. Some details seem soft. |
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06/04/2003 05:24:41 PM |
Nice focus & lighting...I like it...
JB |
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06/04/2003 01:47:23 PM |
| Fine work. The (hell what's it called - the thing you blow into?) seems a little cursory to me - how about some ribbons or streamers to give it some company? The confetti doesn't read too well, and the lamp reflection in the glass is perhaps a bit much too - did you try top-lighting it? |
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06/04/2003 01:43:09 PM |
| Clever idea. The highlights on the bubbles are perfectly done. Your lighting is great. One little distracting blow out stripe on the noise maker, but not a huge issue. |
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06/04/2003 07:01:33 AM |
| Cute idea. Nice light just a little soft on the focus. |
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06/04/2003 05:07:38 AM |
| Very clever idea. Good work. |
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