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10/10/2005 03:07:24 AM |
Courages title to place on the image. I hope you weren't hit too hard by those not knowing the quote it came from.
I do agree with you, the composition could be better. However, it does have a srong leading diagonal (the bottle) going for it. If the opener had been leading to the corner instead of out the top I feel it would have been a bit stronger.
But the composition isn't my biggest worry here. The image just has way too much contrast for my taste. The bottle is quite a bit underexposed while the background is glaringly overexposed. Exposing for the bottle (perhaps stopped down a small amount) would have kept the white background, but allowed the bottle and opener to be better represented. This stark dynamic range is aceented even more by the sharpening done. The end result is a photo that is more 'edgy' than I like.
David
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10/03/2005 10:37:41 AM |
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10/01/2005 01:51:55 PM |
and I love this photo. A little too much sharpening, but still striking. |
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10/01/2005 07:36:52 AM |
The cap looks oversharpened. |
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09/30/2005 09:10:14 PM |
lol - funny title. I like the green of the cap, but the background is just a little bit too harshly white for me. |
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09/29/2005 12:35:42 PM |
This looks way oversaturated to me. |
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09/29/2005 10:25:21 AM |
Don't care much for your title--not sure what God has to do with opening a beer. |
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09/29/2005 09:07:10 AM |
Excellent title! Beautiful color! |
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09/28/2005 09:30:20 AM |
don't understand relationship of title to photo |
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