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06/09/2003 07:10:28 AM |
THis should have placed - I like it better than the screams that got better scores! |
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06/08/2003 06:58:09 PM |
Composition is great: you focus in on the mouth,but you leave room for the sound to go! |
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06/08/2003 11:18:30 AM |
interesting choice to focus just on the mouth, but I'm struggling to figure out why the lighting is set on the hand and not the source of the sound (the mouth). |
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06/07/2003 05:34:58 PM |
I think this photo speaks "Volumes"
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06/06/2003 06:56:40 AM |
yes! this looks loud indeed. I like the crop in that it focuses the attention on the mouth and the cupped hands and makes it easy to "hear" the yell. I like the space of the right for the sound to fill. Wish we could either see more of the nose or not see it at all. The light on the hand looks very nice - but I wish it were illuminating the mouth - that would "tell the story" better. The photo is not after all of a hand, nut of the sound coming out of the mouth. |
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06/04/2003 07:27:25 PM |
I like the composition and choice on the desaturated colors. |
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06/04/2003 05:09:00 PM |
This photo definitly makes me hear sound. It captures the essence. |
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06/03/2003 09:51:59 PM |
HOME ALONE 37!
*ahem* Pardon me. It does meet the topic, but it's a little on the bland side -- white shirt and pale background and even the paleness of the skin on the left side. This may have been deliberate to emphasize the mouth but as the neutral space takes up so much of the photo it works against that in my view. |
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06/02/2003 04:48:01 PM |
just a little too dark, a little more lighting on the face would be great
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06/02/2003 10:28:23 AM |
Wonderful tonal qualities and excellent composition. Very much conveys the spirit of the challenge. 10 |
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06/02/2003 05:46:40 AM |
10 for concept, 6 for execution: 7 overall. :-> It seems kind of grainy and flat, somehow. I hear the photo (which is my major grading criteria for this contest). |
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